by Daniellekitten
Fuck. Is it a copycat killer, or is it Tina or Michelle and they're angry over what happened to them? Will you continue this storyline, or not?
Ahh the cliff hanger..
I know your writing (posting) several stories, but I'm so glad you've continued with this one. Soooo good!
I was thinking a prolog involving babies or getting old together. I never saw that ending coming!
You are so good!!
I did not see that coming. Bravo!!!!
10 stars!!! Hehe
Interesting ending. To be continued? This story was like an episode of 'Criminal Minds'........
So who was the original dead girl with the red ribbon in her hair and why did the uncle kill her? What happened to his uncle and his parents? Was her murder ever solved? Maybe his uncle is still alive and will take over David's obsession with Kaylee just as David became obsessed with his uncle's dead brunette wearing the red ribbon.
I'm an incurable romantic and as such I found the ending of this story somewhat unsatisfying. I found the hint of a sequel to the story at the end to be rather contrived. Also, I would have liked to have known what happened to Michelle and Tina - perhaps their story/stories may make a better sequel? Otherwise, an excellent story up to your usual standards!
I'm as hard as a rock and soon my furious fist will draw seed from my loins. Daniellekitten, you've done it again.