by shiprat
Maybe at a certain period 200-2010…this type of stupid whorish story May have been the rage and given you or Aurelius82 very high scores…
But now…they just seem too pathetic to even mark on…I think u seriously need to look at your pathetic life and make yourself useful…maybe u will actually end up being happy? Rather them pathetic??
So I always wonder, what about all those neglected husbands?
Can we now justify their cheating/and running off with another woman?
Yet to read this one but happy our Shiprat Garu is back after her blockbuster Indian wife and Nukkad guys :-)
Shiprat pls ignore some lund fukeer negative comments and continue with your good work on erotica
Dear Incels
The more you lose your mind at my dark and honest stories, sitting in your patriarchal limp palaces, the more motivated I get to keep writing stories.
So please, keep the insults coming. And I'll keep the stories coming. Deal?
Wimpy husband - check
Cultured and unsatisfied housewives - check
Alpha male with amazing dick energy - check
Forcing and seducing - check
Wife submits - check
This is almost the template of all indian stories except a few.
The problem iss that you, Aurelius, urbanslut, brew etc still live in 15 years older world where women are supposed to be chaste.
But with the new tinder generation, most of the woman lose their virginity before 20 and there are lot of hookups, premarital sex so your stories don't have the appeal anymore.
I would request you to update your stories alongwith the times and give us new ones instead of the old wine in a new bottle
Welcome Shipra.
Great premise, good character set up, good build up but I am disappointed with the sex scene. You built it up well but the sex scene ended as soon as it started. I wish you would have fleshed out the sex scene even more because after all, it's a sex story.
I hope there's a part 2 and more because this story has a lot of potential for further development. I hope you'd add a lot more sex in those.
Bdrew.
Great Premise, good character introductions and development. Good pace. But I am disappointed with the sex scene. It ended before it even started. I wish you would have fleshed out the sex scene after a good build up; after all its a sex story.
This story has a lot of potential for more parts. I hope you do write more.
Welcome Back Shipra.
Bdrew.
So good to see you back. Big fan of your work!
I will be honest. This story is noway near your best works, but still managed to get me wet ;) Thanks for sharing and keep them coming!
It's soooooo Good to have you back.....really admire your writing.....please write more frequently!!
I know you good communication skills as well as written also but make it understand to me
fantastic story. So glad you're writing again, please write more. eagerly waiting for the part 2.
Hey Shiprat,
I've been trying to reach you a couple of times with no success.
I just wanted to let you know how much I love your story 'Reddy Garu' that I had to make my own version about it.
I wanted to send it to you and hoping it would inspire you to do part 2. I hope that you would reply back this time.
Regards,
Ota
Hey Shiprat,
Just wanted to let you know that I finally published my own version of Reddy Garu, you can find it here: https://www.literotica.com/s/reddy-garu-1
Please have a look and please continue the series
Regards,
Ota
Hey Shiprat,
Just wanted to let you know that I finally published my own version of Reddy Garu, you can find it here: https://www.literotica.com/s/reddy-garu-1
Please have a look and please continue the series
Regards,
Ota
All retired and neglected husbands always try the hot neighbour ladies and it is mutually beneficial