All Comments on 'Reflections Ch. 04'

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hodunkhodunkalmost 12 years ago
GreatChapter to a Great Story!

DG you are amazing ! The storys you write are fantastic and I can't wait for more. Keep'em comin!

bruce22bruce22almost 12 years ago
Lovely Romance

Careers did not interfere very much in the past because the relationships were very unequal usually. Now though, one should be careful about who you fall in love with because their jobs and yours may not give you opportunity to form a family. There are a lot of different solutions. I went and found a job that I enjoyed in the city where my wife worked. We have been together for forty eight years!

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
PARLEY VOUS....FRANEISET

coupe not included, Dont forego the last warning, TK U MLJ LV NV

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
FOR DGH, THIS IS A GOOD STORY

I THINK YOU CAN ADD A FEW MORE CHAPTERS, THERE IS AN UNDERLYING CURRENT/THEME THAT COULD LEAD TO SITUATIONS AND TRAGEDY AGAIN, tk u mlj lv nv

michs28michs28almost 12 years ago

Where is chapter 5? Great story, thank you for writing it.

john1946john1946almost 12 years ago
More please

More more more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
this was a real short page

he cant live without her, shes french and he is going to be president of a large corp. they come from two cont apart. she is much younger than him and wants children a home also she is a successful model. so if they get together some one or both will have to give up a lot to make this work. she has her doubts,so where do they go from here. maybe the writter can make this believable. but it is going to be very hard to do.. the Donald gets his women from the runway ,they sign a prenut and when he tires of them he dumps them. buys his beauties cheaply considering his wealth.

trashmantxtrashmantxalmost 12 years ago
more please

Keep it coming DGH, I always check for new ones from you!

DunaDunaalmost 12 years ago
5 stars

Good story, but short 1 page........

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

A great story, wish I could have lived it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Extremely nice follow-up. The last couple of paragraphs were difficult to read but they are the springboard for the next chapter. I loved her signature when she leaves his room in Paris: Till we meet again. Among the various possible equivalents for Au Revoir, this is by far the one that is most appropriate and accurate in the context. To me, it adds to the quality and accuracy of the writing and the whole story. This story get better and better with each chapter. Thx DGH

5*

BJ

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