by Fuzzypen
I hope you'll consider using this situation to create a little more conflict and drama for the story. The sister should really be far more hurt and jealous at first then just straight to arousal in my opinion. This story is hot and well written but needs a little more drama. You have taken it to a good place for that and So I'm looking forward to more. Thank you.
Paige should punish her mother for not inviting her to the party, tying and whipping your ass while looking like make hard sex her daughters and unable to participate ... until the end.
Becarefull how you go from here if you write it without any kind resentment you will screw it up because it will be too unrealistic