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"Me too, Mom. I love you too! I never want to leave your arms..." her daughter replied, pressing her forehead to her mother's.
They held each other for a long time, their hands stroking lovingly across one another's skin. Gina finally sighed, and pulled herself up onto an elbow. "We should get back out there and make sure the others are ok." she said.
Jamie had forgotten all about her uncle, and realization flashed across her face. "Shit, you're right..." The two women reluctantly separated and quickly got dressed. They laced their fingers together, and holding hands, walked out of the master bedroom.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 8 years agoI love all of your stories, I haven't found anyone else who writes like you. So don't stop. My pussy gets so incredibly wet with each of these and I look forward to the new ones the entire time. This series has been my favorite and has transformed quite a bit. An orgy would be great, like switching and stuff. As incredibly and smutty as you can make it.
Korianderover 8 years agoI've got to hand it to you, Fuzzypen. You have really shown great improvement ever since you posted your first chapters here on LIT.
I really like the tempo and detail you give your new series. You're going much slower now, exploring every step on your road map to the fullest. You also spend much more time describing the emotions and conflicts of your characters than in older stories. I'm very pleased about that.
I also like your condensed way of writing. All your chapters are about the same length and yet they don't feel like there's anything missing, or like you're in a rush. I applaud you for that. If I should ever get back to writing my series, I want to try to do the same.
I don't agree with my fellow commenters that this story needs more drama or action. Or to put it in another way, I'm not in a rush. I believe all that is being asked here will come in one or the other future chapters. I think people are just impatient and want to skip to the end.
So here's to you, Fuzzypen. I admire your enthusiasm and determination to continue what you started. I wish I had only half of that.
Best regards,
Koriander
