All Comments on 'Rekindled Affair'

Gentle romantic story - moves very quickly. I would like to see more detail in the writing - the story leaves too much to the imagination. This is more of a romance story as opposed to an erotic story. The writing is good - you should definitely continue - but maybe read some of the other stories under the heading you gave this and see what else is out there.

Good luck in your writing and thank you for sharing.

i thought this was poignant and sweet.

This could have been placed in a non-erotic or romance category. This story was far too rushed for a twenty-year time frame. Get an editor! There were way too many errors, from run-on sentences to simple punctuation. It was annoying.