All Comments on 'Remember?'

Wonderful story and style... don't stop!

Hail to the Victors!

Thank you so much!!!

and Go Blue!!! :)

I loved the rythym of the story...the buildup and the climax. Very erotic. Well done, Sunshine!

I enjoyed the balance of control and that sort of gentle tenderness. It meshes very well. I liked the characters a lot. Well done!

Thank you, Ella!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thank you so much!!! I'm so glad you liked it, Playfullittle1!!

Mmmmm I enjoyed the tempo...the build and everything that followed...well done!

This is you to the max, I love looking through these prose into you mind and soul.

Very very nice.

Thank you PJ. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it!!!!!

My favorite Pirate Man.....So glad that you loved it!!!!! Thank you.

I liked it a lot. Thanks for writing about us. I think you should have actually called me by name once or twice, though.

@BBB........you don't want to make the others jealous. ;)

loved it, awesome eroticism and visuals.

I really loved reading this. Your writing sends chills through me. It was as if I was him and could feel everything. Keep up the great work!!!!

@Rich4goodgirl Thank you!!!!!!!! I am glad you enjoyed it!!!!!

@FunFilled80 I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!! I try my best to make it seem "real".

How could I forget? The fingers tightening around your wrist, the firming nipples the union. I will remember for a long time!

@ERM..........such a nice visual!!!!!

Almost as if I was there. Where DO you get your inspiration?

@andyomama66 Thank you!!!! I get my inspiration from anywhere. It could be based on a conversation that I have had; a picture I saw; random thoughts that cross my mind; etc. I always have stories going on in my head, just waiting to get out...but it's a different matter when it comes to writing them down. *smiles*

This is a gem. Sexy imagery and natural dialogue, plus the ending is nice and tight (just like the ending she recalls)

@jordanp76 Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it!!

Great timing and pace to your writing, loved the story and love your poetry as well

Goldminingsux

@Goldminingsux Thank you so much!!!!! I'm very glad you enjoyed them.

Great story, sunshine! Good characters, good situation, nice detail. Hot!

Please keep writing. :-)

@ Nigel Thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed it.

That was really fabulous and I'm a super harsh critic. I haven't submitted here yet but your work makes me think I just may need to. But what do you think of this, please, if you have a moment?

http://www.lushstories.com/stories/oral-sex/a-lesson-in-sexual-karma.aspx

I have always wondered what I should do with my ties..Very hot story, is it your experience?

@stevebaker686 Not from my experience, just my fantasies!

WOW! That was hot, you perfectly captured the moment and sexual play. This story feels real and that makes it even better.

Write more!!!

That hot, that's is so erotic, I troll lit night and day looking for erotic stories like this, but rarely come across any, there are sex stories, very sexy stories, then there are a few in this class, sadly it was to short, I want more, PLEASE

Mouthwatering