All Comments on 'Replacing Dad'

by E_Night

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Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 8 years ago

Loved the story. Just wish it was longer. Can there be a part two in the future?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Too rushed

Everything happened too fast. No build-up.

E_NightE_Nightover 8 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback!

Thanks a lot for the good feedback so far. In honesty I normally write much longer stories but I only just recently started writing on this site and wasn't sure how long is too long for most people. I was planning to test that out with my next one.

I suppose I could see a part two to this one. It was my first time writing mother incest and I was surprised how enjoyable I found it. Normally I'm just daddy/daughter or daddy/son all the way. :)

kingswedekingswedeover 8 years ago
Great story

Great story, now we need further chapters from you about his love of family.

homerjayhomerjayover 8 years ago
awesome

great premise, hot sex, short and sweet. thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great Start

Please write more . Thank you for your writings.

JackM30ffJackM30ffover 7 years ago
A little short.

Short but pretty hot.

Crusader235Crusader235almost 5 years ago
Yes

Yes transfer ASAP! Nothing like home cooked food, and hot handy women to help a guy get thru college. Five Stars!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago
???

God grief??? what does that mean? maybe you should read through your story at least once before posting, dummy.

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