All Comments on 'Replacing Mom'

Daddy-daughter isn't usually my thing. As I am a fan of your other work, I read this story. I enjoyed it. The topic and its development were handled with consideration and tact, and didn't stray from being believable very much. I will certainly give your future efforts of a similar nature a look! Good work!

5 Star

I definitely love reading your fantabulous story's😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 my favorite thing everything 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞 most favorite is stocking and pantyhose heels!!!!!!!!!!I love women wear them💖💖💖💖💖💖💖 thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!

Jayda? Who was she? And just how much twat teen or otherwise, did she eat? You cant throw things like that and not give an answer to them. Really good tho.

your stories are always the best. guess that's because I like the theme and really like the stockings

I want to see more chapters of this story so it won't be The End.

Dear Jaz

First, I rate this a five * * * * *

A nice hot story for a cold season. A nice transition from mother to daughter - nicely handled and very enjoyable.

You are the star on top of my Christmas tree. Happy Christmas!

Love, Jack Auff

But, the big issues is the dialogue. I've read a lot of your writing, and even though it is hard to convey the visual, the issue is too much talking, not enough fucking. Or should I say you don't paint a clear picture with your words so you use theirs. And, I know from experience, that in the throws of passion, and the deep breathing needed for a really good session, there would never be that much speaking, let alone the instant acceptance of being a sexually submissive cum slut. Then the difference of a cum in me slut or a cum on me slut. I feel you rob us of the exploration of their depravity. It's one thing to know you're sexually submissive, and another to learn how to be submissive sexually.

Keep up the good words

Myhands316

You have some of the best stories I've ever read!

really like your stories keep them coming

Ah, once again you've spun a magical tale.

It would have been 10 if it had some really good illustrations

Your story's are some of the best. Would love to hear how his slut progresses.

......and too much of it.

It's a pity the editors you were careful to thank didn't do a better job of advising you.

Got wood from that one!!

Another SSL masterpiece! Loved it!! Five stars and a favorite point!

I agree with many of the prior comments. And, yes, I agree it is another 5 star tale. I'd like to read more of Lesley and Daddy! Read about taking her anal cherry. Read about Lesley and Daddy and Jayda! And want to read about Daddy worshiping her lovely feet and toes with hands, fingers, mouth, lips, tongue and cock! Lesley giving her first footjob! Jas, you write the best! And I fantasized about living this out. Not with my daughter, but with a special lady actually a few years younger than my daughter! A very special lady that will know I'm writing of her as she reads this! Thanks for giving me the chance to say that to her! And kisses to her! YL

I really enjoyed it. I just wish you would have talked about it how it stretched and hurt you a little since you have never had a cock like that. But still, it was a really good story.

How about an update on what’s going on in 6 months?

You never fail to please. Thanks for all of the great stories.

have you ever thought about having any of your stories made into videos they would be incredible

A sweet and tender story.

Loss of a Mother into a tender and loving relationship with CRAZY AND LUSTFUL SEX.

Continue this story, especially when he takes her virgin ass.

great story

Great story please continue this one. The fashion error wearing stockings with open toe shoes.

But we need a follow-on with Jayda.. or Angela, or maybe both

An amazing story that wasn't over burdened with too many characters, and just the right length, but it can't just end there can it? There's Christmas Day & New Yeara day to come & how will things go once she has to head back to school?

Can't wait for more of your work

What a hot story.

Well developed plot, excellent dirty talk and a great story.

A reader was saying that there was too much talking but not enough fucking. Me and my wife feel that it was that nasty talk that is always the the best of your stories. Your dirty talk fuels our fantasies further. Thank you for that.

An excellent hot story with well developed plot.

I was thinking how extremely well balanced this story is: just enough sweetness, just enough raunch, carefully molded into a recipe that is "just right".

And as soon as that phrase popped into my head I'm thinking you could probably craft a pretty fun homage to "Goldilicks (oops, Goldilocks) and the Three Bears" where the youngest brother is too soft/worshipful, the oldest too hard/abusive but the middle one is "just right". That's my unsolicited story idea for the day.

Thanks for the great read!

This has been by far the best story I have read. Everything seemed to roll together perfectly.

I really liked the story, but there was so much dialogue. I understand it's necessary for the plot, but it really killed it for me when everything else rolled together so nicely

What a well written, passionate and emotional sexy piece of writing.

I think I had better put my stockings and garter belt on today.

My Butt Plug is already in position

I just finished reading your story and wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed it. Good story line and wonderful dialogue. Very HOT.

Well, you did it again! What a great story for this contest. Good luck in the voting.

You always have excellent stories. Please keep writing.

And consider more Father daughter pieces, you do a lot with mothers, and mother daughter, but I find this really hot. Keep it up.

For me this is one among your best stories. Please spice the next story with more seducing and with mommy (mom) seducing daughter with verbal and sexual acts.

Why name calling? It’s such a turn off

Retarded. Please die soon.

Great story but too much build up and too little "title" material. I hope there will be a few more parts to the story.

off the letter was really deep and emotional. got me there for a sec.

wished you continued a little more, being a true three-hole-slut,

as I said in another comment.

always teasing, then coming to a climax and then abruptly stop.

Good job, thanks for sharing.

Great story. Thank you!

Loved it. Amusing to see an "anonymous" say Awful and wanting worse for you. It is amazing that such idiots exist, posting their issues after having read the story. LOL

Enjoyed the read. Great story and loved the pace of it

Her seduction of him was HOT! Keep them cuming.

Really good. The last part became repetitive with the obscenities; it seemed kind of forced. Still over all a fantastic story. 4.5/5 story.

435. I thought this was familiar now noticing that 8 months ago I commented on this one before I decided to read all of your masterpieces before I started to number them. I love when daughters with little experience learn quickly about getting fuckedi in all 3 holes and returning the pleasures.

Wonderful story and a very enjoyable read. 5 Stars. Thanks for writing it.

Great story! Other than trying too hard to win her dad's attention, prior to ready the letter, it flowed naturally enough for credibility.

So, despite too many of your other recent works no satisfying, this tale redeems your status as a fine writer and one of my favorites. 5*

Vulgar and verbose...You may disregard these comments since I'm not at all into the dom/sub thing or the nylon stocking and foot fetish...