All Comments on 'Requiem for a Saudi Woman'

...a sorry requiem for this sorry-a** story, mentioning Afaf again, Ottawa, same Arabic greeting to open this kind of story with, etc, etc., etc. YAWN

Time this poor excuse of a 'writer' got out of mommy's basement and got a life. Stop polluting this site with your garbage.

I'm dismayed by the hostility shown by the 2 previous comments. At least one of them had the guts to step out from the cloak of anonymity. In my opinion this is, as I said, a decent beginning but it is too short. It introduces the characters but hasn't time to do more with them. In my view, it would be better to delay posting until you have had time to develop more plot and to provide more dramatic tension. As it stands, it says little except to complain about Canada and Canadians. As such it is pretty one dimensional. I am not Canadian, but I can easily see how they might be angered by this. Your choice, as ever. You have the ability to create a credible character, so please extend yourself.