by GWBosh
There is a whole section on scifi/fantasy stories that disagrees with you, Other Guy. I thought this story was excellent and well-written.
the other comment is gone now, I guess, sorry, or something, anyway good story
Of course this is a mans dream. I hope there is a slight possibility of this happening to me (I know there's not but so what). When I want reality I read the newspaper.
Sure it is fantasy but the humor nicely counterbalances any implausibility. A thoroughly enjoyable read. ;)
Definately one of the most well-written pieces of work on this site, showing talent beyond the world of literotica, great beginning, great ending, great overall story.
..list! What a great story, written with care and great structure. The anal play was erotic without being coarse. I had a perfect image of both women in my head. This was writing at its best. P. Grimm (bigrimmstales)
It's probly the best Iv'e read so far! Short sweet and just the right pungent flavor all skippers dream about.Captian Mike
This is without doubt the best story I have read,
Sea sex and Humour too.
Just good fun
Thanks
A touching, funny and masterfully written story. (The last of those is rare on this site.) I imgined the characters, from the dialogue, as having Australian accents - was that intended?
To Anonymous in England
Thank you for your very kind comments. Except for the Australian suggestion. No, they are not the descendants of convicts and banana benders. About 2,000 km east.
Cheers GWB
If you enjoyed this, you might like to read the sequel "A Mother, A Daughter and a Sailor". Click on my name and you should get there.
Best wishes
GWB
A dead captain sitting on the toilet, the women giggling inappropriately, and insulting their only hope for rescue. I decided quickly not to invest any more of my time. But I thought you did have some plot points that good potential, just poor execution. anon jerry
nice, light, flight of fantasy story, with a rare bit of sweetness to it, and the wonderful bit of oddness to it's beginning. Draws nicely for classic short story writing.
Hi
If you enjoyed this you might like to read the sequel, A Mother, a Daughter and a Sailor.
The easiest way to find it is to click my name (i.e. the author's) at the top of the page.
Good reading, GWB
i enjoyed the read but the ending made me laughed to hard and i lost my wood
Just a fun read of the saving of not One but Two Damsels in distress. That these two goddesses of the sea, were beautiful, intelligent, and horny sure made their rescue exciting. Five Stars for a delightful story. I would surely like to read the rest of their story, do the youngsters get married, does mom live with them, and enjoy more wonderful sex? Does Mike finish his book? I hope we find the answers to these questions, and more.
I’ll bet the secretary isn’t the type to give someone shit for rescuing her when she’s stranded in the middle of the ocean. Sounds like the husband made the right choice.