All Comments on 'Rescue at Sea'

by GWBosh

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fenrysfenrysalmost 17 years ago
Good

There is a whole section on scifi/fantasy stories that disagrees with you, Other Guy. I thought this story was excellent and well-written.

fenrysfenrysalmost 17 years ago
oops

the other comment is gone now, I guess, sorry, or something, anyway good story

I-WISHI-WISHalmost 17 years ago
Dream

Of course this is a mans dream. I hope there is a slight possibility of this happening to me (I know there's not but so what). When I want reality I read the newspaper.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
An enjoyable yarn.

Pure escapist fantasy. I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Wish it was me

Great story. Perfect sort of escape from reality.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
excellent

Sure it is fantasy but the humor nicely counterbalances any implausibility. A thoroughly enjoyable read. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Amazing....

Definately one of the most well-written pieces of work on this site, showing talent beyond the world of literotica, great beginning, great ending, great overall story.

bigrimmstalesbigrimmstalesabout 16 years ago
And this is the reason i have you on my favourites

..list! What a great story, written with care and great structure. The anal play was erotic without being coarse. I had a perfect image of both women in my head. This was writing at its best. P. Grimm (bigrimmstales)

Swimmer101Swimmer101about 16 years ago
4 winds blown away

It's probly the best Iv'e read so far! Short sweet and just the right pungent flavor all skippers dream about.Captian Mike

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
just a dream

This is without doubt the best story I have read,

Sea sex and Humour too.

Just good fun

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Great reading

A touching, funny and masterfully written story. (The last of those is rare on this site.) I imgined the characters, from the dialogue, as having Australian accents - was that intended?

GWBoshGWBoshover 15 years agoAuthor
No insults please

To Anonymous in England

Thank you for your very kind comments. Except for the Australian suggestion. No, they are not the descendants of convicts and banana benders. About 2,000 km east.

Cheers GWB

GWBoshGWBoshover 15 years agoAuthor
Sequel to this story

If you enjoyed this, you might like to read the sequel "A Mother, A Daughter and a Sailor". Click on my name and you should get there.

Best wishes

GWB

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
I couldn't get beyond the first page.

A dead captain sitting on the toilet, the women giggling inappropriately, and insulting their only hope for rescue. I decided quickly not to invest any more of my time. But I thought you did have some plot points that good potential, just poor execution. anon jerry

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
nice story

nice, light, flight of fantasy story, with a rare bit of sweetness to it, and the wonderful bit of oddness to it's beginning. Draws nicely for classic short story writing.

GWBoshGWBoshalmost 14 years agoAuthor
There is a sequel: A Mother, a Daughter and a Sailor

Hi

If you enjoyed this you might like to read the sequel, A Mother, a Daughter and a Sailor.

The easiest way to find it is to click my name (i.e. the author's) at the top of the page.

Good reading, GWB

sinslinsinslinover 11 years ago
great ending

i enjoyed the read but the ending made me laughed to hard and i lost my wood

Crusader235Crusader235about 5 years ago
Fun

Just a fun read of the saving of not One but Two Damsels in distress. That these two goddesses of the sea, were beautiful, intelligent, and horny sure made their rescue exciting. Five Stars for a delightful story. I would surely like to read the rest of their story, do the youngsters get married, does mom live with them, and enjoy more wonderful sex? Does Mike finish his book? I hope we find the answers to these questions, and more.

AnonymousAnonymous30 days ago

I’ll bet the secretary isn’t the type to give someone shit for rescuing her when she’s stranded in the middle of the ocean. Sounds like the husband made the right choice.

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