by Candell
Although it was short, it was very enjoyable. Great Earth Day Entry. Nicely done!
On theme and hot. I'd liked to have seen the buildup expanded a bit more, but it carries the story nonetheless. Good luck in the contest!
Dark/LesLumens
Wish I can celebrate Earth Day this way. The story flow feels so right and natural. Thank you for a very goood read. Earthy woman is a great turn on for me. All the best for the contest. More story on Gaia please.