All Comments on 'Retropunk Giantess'

It does feel as though they are just introducing the characters when they end. I hope you write some longer ones. Thanks for sharing.

Nice beginning, but now you've introduced your character and given her a (scanty) back story, what are you going to do with her? This is a good first chapter, but now you need to create a problem requiring her size changing super power, then have her solve it!