All Comments on 'Returning to Your Roots'

by TxRad

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tennmactennmacalmost 11 years ago
Sequel

I hope that's not all

wolf9696wolf9696almost 11 years ago

Ch 2 pls.......pretty pls with a cherry on top.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
*****

Five.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
good stuff

That was a fast & fun 4 page ride !

disturbedhrtdisturbedhrtalmost 11 years ago
great work

Good job nice flowing story cant wait for more try and include sex at work and mote cousins

hveminemhveminemalmost 11 years ago
Good story

But can you please decide if her name is Ruth or Ruby!!!

SweetMajSweetMajalmost 11 years ago
HOT...HOT...HOT!!!

Thank you for this excellent story, Tx.

Very well written as always.

I laughed a few times as well: "Spelunking." :)

I would love a chapter two with all three of them together!

XXX

liquid_yellowliquid_yellowalmost 11 years ago
Hot!

Definitely calls for more chapters!

txcoatl1970txcoatl1970almost 11 years ago
XXXcellent Romp

You pulled off a rip-roaring yarn this time with great set-up, well-drawn characters and plenty of Texas flavor to it. Outstanding story that makes me eager to what else is in store!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Great Dialogue

This is one of the finest yarns I've read. Great fast flowing dialogue. More please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Texas Towns

Moody Texas is in the Waco area, and nowhere near Athens or Baxter Texas

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Stepped in shit, now he's growing roses

Yes he may have left school sudden but he still seems to be learning and not just bartending. And there is very little wrong with kissing cousins.

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
a fun beginning

how much further will you take us?

dinkymacdinkymacover 9 years ago
Super!!

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Damn!

That was one sweet tale. Dialogue like real people, women with wit and a man with a head for for good oral. There was even a little background to give everything a bit of spice. TexRad you are an artist, Sir. Truly an artiste.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Detals Details DETAILS😃

Glorious details😊 And u knew just how far to bring us, so we could hang off the damn cliff😄 HoneyGirl is captivated😄

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