All Comments on 'Reunion: Aftermath'

Not too shabby

saddletramp1956’ you have told a story of what happens when someone fails to follow some good advice. For Julia to become enthralled with Jules Connor says something about her character, even if she was drugged. Julia was lacking in moral fortitude it seems.

A bit short but not a bad story. AAAA+++

Classic Saddle Tramp Tale! Loved it!

Thank you

Sentenced to death? Hard to imagine, especially when California recently changed its law making not telling a new partner you have HIV from a felony to now a misdemeanor.

Unless the story is set in Georgia or Texas, the death sentence will almost never be carried out. You should have had him sentenced to life, but in general population, so the thugs who ass rape him catch the super clap too. Reduces the surplus prison population.

Damn. That was perhaps one of your most brutally merciless stories to date… do you think your next one will be a little more lighthearted or have a happier ending?

Over the top but that's what we expect from the Tramp! Enjoyed it! Keep writing, Sir. You bring joy to your fans.

Cheers SAGE

Well, I'm glad that's not a wimp cuckold story as there are more than enough here. But this is a very dark sequel.

Good story. A real stretch though to get to the STD basis of your Revenge Arron but I got to admit that the original was such a worthless wimp cuckold Poe story that any measures are justified in that regard. Was nice as always to see justice served as with all of your stories Longhorn. Would have been nice though to have her buried though so he could have been afforded the opportunity of final relief. After all graveside ceremonies rarely provide restroom facilities and after all even a sociopath bitch deserves a final lasting “tribute.” (Chuckle…).

As usual. 5stars

Well in my world im a king and fuck what anyone says.. not bad

Well that story cried out for the Saddletramp treatment, however did not see that plot twist coming. Dark karma, love your work.

Wow, that was awesome, loved how it went from cuck to total burn.

You know you have made it when your name is now a verb

She was “Saddletrampled”

Please add links to the original story you are writing the continuation or an alternate ending for. It just makes it so much easier to read it before your new addendum.

Well another one gets their justice Saddletramp style. I didn’t see the twist with the STD but either way all parties involved came out better than than expected. The letter was a good touch the nurse was shall we say a little over protective without knowing the whole story. Overall another classic

Glad that story got the ST1956 treatment. Liked the story

Scores 5/5

Pretty good, but not up to your usual standard

Very good as usual...Only @saddletramp1956 to save a so bad story, after @FTDS had ended...4*

Decent follow-up and you did a good job carrying over the flow of the original. 4*

Nice job here. You finished off a story left hanging albeit with a different twist. Certainly a full five finish again.

This was a downer. He could have saved her life, and he made only the smallest effort - really no effort at all. So he could say "I told you so." Some guy drugs and fucks your wife, and you allow her to die? He's the one who should buy the farm. D

Ouch! Dark, dark, dark sequel. BUT---5 stars. Something I would have done. Justice is served.

Then again, my wife would never have pulled that crap.

When I saw you had a sequel to that pos story I was thinking of a different scenario. Him showing up at her parents 50th anniversary or maybe family reunion having been invited by her grandmother who loved him more than her. Of course Julia would be there with that piece of human garbage because why not since they were divorcing. Granma would help him by putting the letter up on a projector and her whole family would pretty much disown her. Granma would lay into her how she turned into a worthless tramp just like her mother. Her drop dead gorgeous cousin would speak up for him about his worth as a man and they'd end up together. A couple of his nerd friends from school would hack some computers and ruin Jules life and put him in jail. He would tell her he didnt say anything or try to stop her because if she was that much of a slut good riddance to bad rubbish, she should have stopped herself

Too dark. This, for me, was not an enjoyable read.

The only thing that would've made this better was if she lived to regret her decision. I know it's ur story but I hate it when the cheater dies because they don't suffer the consequences even it was the ultimate one.

As always pleased with another Saddletramp story. A true story teller.

tragic and sad but your writing is as usual top notch. no nitpicking here

A pleasant change of pace for ST but still an excellent story.

That's the right answer for all cuck fans. That's how real people act. But when I look at the young men of today, I get scared!

No one can write a happy ending like the Tramp. 😁

Unusual, but a fitting ending. Great job!

Good, but for me a bit over the top. No problem there. Fantasy is still good.

"You waved me off, saying it was just a UTI and would pass." - Do UTIs "just pass?" I thought that untreated they could lead to serious complications.

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"I held up my hand to quiet her and gave her the unopened letter." - He gave the letter to the nurse.

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I know we're dealing with a follow-up, but this doesn't sound like the same guy that wouldn't stand up to his former bully.

I do believe this is the supidest most pathetic ridiculous us over the top story that I've ever read.

The original story was violent stupid and beyond all

rationality and what makes this more absurd is that saddletramp1956 felt an over powering urge to "fix this"

Good follow-up and twist. Enjoyed the story.

Agree the original needed a sequel but....she was drugged and got not an iota of sympathy. Pretty harsh, but it what i expect from most of your stories. That said, he could have forgiven her on her deathbed without changing the story much. Made him out to be the biggest prick in my mind.

As usual, great. 6 stars. The Bear approves. I love your stories; can't get enough. Hope he enjoys the cruise.

The BEAR

Immature nonsense for the emotionally simple-minded

Another winner!

5

Dark stuff, but exactly what the original needed in order to set things right. I always appreciate a saddletramp treatment of a cuckold, or cheating wife story. Reed Richards, you’re a bad man, but I do like your idea on reducing overcrowding in prison.

Thank you for turning a CUCK shit story into something much better. 5 BIG FUCKING STARS!

A great and unusual way for someone to be SADDLETRAMPED!

To those who say she deserved more sympathy because she was drugged... she certainly wasn't drugged when she wrote the letter... that's what did it for the MC.

Hope i never piss you off! Scorched earth, gotta love it. Good job putting lipstick on that pig of an original story.

Now, from Saddle Tramp: 'Mk XIX Self-Burning Beeyatches!'

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As always, 5++++++++++/5!!!!

There had to be some life insurance policy that he gets beside what the company offered. To me that would be the real kicker and telling her on her death bed that no divorce would have occurred simply so he could keep all the money as he knew she would die.

I avoid cheating wives' stories because they hit too close to home. Your story just jumped out at me so I read it and I was impressed with the way the husband dealt with the issue. There should be a section for husbands getting even.

Im getting the impression that saddletramp, unfortunately, has peaked.

While marginally better than the original, which was a low bar to begin with, that is not a cheering endorsement of what we got this time. I found little in it to have justified the time I spent reading it.

SaddleTramp has done some amazing work in the past, but most of what I read lately shows little effort and seems to be aimed strictly at the grunting chest beating types.

Great story. I would not read the original because of its storyline, but you certainly changed the character of the poor husband for the better,. 5 stars.

Bitch deserved it.

Nice to read great writers in Vandemonium1 and ST1956 in one day, good way to drown out those cuck garbage pile of this week (hey I didn't read any of them fully, just enough to surmise they're cuck stories).

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I think I have never read the original story not that I want to, knowing what kind the story was. One thing I didn't quite agree in the story here is that the MC can't forgive Julia. Yes I would be too mad too to think of forgiving but after that last conversation it really won't hurt anyone to forgive a dying person as Julia is going to meet her Maker and gets the justice fit for her. You see forgiving someone is actually a plus point for the giver not the receiver as the receiver whether he is forgiven by the betrayed person or not will not affect his/her judgement with God. God is just and he will give justice. But God will look upon with approval on the one who gave forgiveness and God will remember that good deed.

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Nice read ST1956. As always I truly appreciate your effort.

I always tear up a little a happy endings. Good Bye to bad trash.

I think there's probably a way you could make your story more macho. I just can't think of one. Your narrator is a cold-hearted SOB.

And a Merry Christmas to you!

Too dark for me

5 stars, good ending to a terrible and disgusting story. Shows the skill of ST1956 that he could turn utter crap into gold.

The irony here is she will receive forgiveness for her part. Her next breath will be taken in heaven. I doubt the same with him. His inability to forgive condemns him. Her actions does tarnish her, but her desire for forgiveness will gain her much. We are all fallen, he will likely never get up, however she will fly.

@Jack440, there IS a link to the original story

@sbrooks103x1 day ago

"You waved me off, saying it was just a UTI and would pass." - Do UTIs "just pass?" I thought that untreated they could lead to serious complications.

The body can often resolve minor, uncomplicated UTIs on its own.

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"I held up my hand to quiet her and gave her the unopened letter." - He gave the letter to the nurse.

She obviously gave it back when she convinced to stay.

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I know we're dealing with a follow-up, but this doesn't sound like the same guy that wouldn't stand up to his former bully.

You must have forgotten that his buddy had a gun in his side?

@reedrichards,

it must not have been in california.

This one checks all the blocks for me. 5***** cd

I wondered what had you so riled up over the original so I went and read it, I sure found out - GAACK!

Thanks for your version, it takes some of the distaste of the original out of my little mind and improves the whole thing. Thanks for helping ......

Biggest Problem!

There are TWO universes here! Tyler Blair’s and ST56’s. And THREE time periods! High school days, military days and (lastly) the reunion days. Tyler establishes the HS days and the reunion days. The reunion days are seen through Sweetie’s eyes in Reunion. ST56 accepts TB’s HS days. In Aftermath, ST56 builds the military period between the earlier HS and the reunion periods. In so doing, he provides for a plausible reversal of the Nerd’s submissive character and the ‘alpha’ aspect of the Bully. But then ST56 goes on to present the reunion period through Hubby’s eyes, a day or so after Sweetie’s account of that. Unfortunately, in doing that, the author ignores the changed dynamic that Hubby imposed on Bully!

There is nothing provided to advise We-The-Readers that Bully would know Hubby married a SuperFox, nor that either or both would show up at the reunion. That ruins the motive for Bully recruiting police friends to dominate (the new alpha) Hubby. Bully would not need to make such preparations if he were still able to bonk his choices among the wives of the local guys over whom he was still alpha! Therefore, when Hubby and Sweetie show up and Bully tries to horn in, all Hubby would have to do is say “Have you forgotten the SandLot?” and stare him down with a cold smile!

3* Singing a harmonious duet is much tougher than doing a solo!!!

Damn. A near-perfect sequel to, what I considered, a weak original.

Great BTB!!! No sympathy...

I knew that if anyone could fix that mess of a story, ST could. It just hit me though, I wouldn't have come across "Reunion" at all if ST hadn't written a sequel. I always read the orginal first, for context, and disliked it enough that I almost didn't read the sequel. Almost. Now I'm wondering if Literotica has a 9-1-1 service where ST gets a call, like a super hero... I know, he is a Super Hero.

ST gobbed an awful lot of lipstick on the original pig to make this sequel. He went OTT at every step, from the incurable STD to the unlikely and excessive penalties, including the cop-friends who surely know how to lie in court.

Entertaining, but in a juvenile way. Notchur best, ST.

Keep 'em comin'.

ST, I know the first story must have pissed you off, since you decided to do a follow up story, but man killing her seems a little mucj. This was two stories of two extremes, first one was way to cucky, this one was a little heavy on the BTB. Thanks for the time and effort ST, I would have never read the original if not for you doing a follow up. KS

Well, you definitely fixed Tyler Blairs "Reunion" story with a great BTB conclusion. Here again we have a storyline where a trophy wife does something really stupid by ignoring her husband Michaels warnings about his Nemesis and ends up paying for it with her life.

This gets my 5/5-star vote.

piglet

5 stars for me especially after the letter she wrote. Some people make decisions without thinking about consequences

Curse to whoever create an instant cure for STD. Anywho caught it should celibate at least a year

Well written but gave it only 3 stars. Nothing on the author as I always like his stories. This one, though, was just my taste. I thought things would be different, but like I wrote, nothing against this fine author.

Fine handling of the original wimpfest. I was always too shy at school to be a competitor with the sexy girls I didn't even date till I started work which ended in marriage, and divorce but started my life in an exciting and positive way. I am living a life that has included a second wife, family and a large and comfortable home with travel and experiences beyond what I ever thought possible. A life well lived is certainly the goal to be aimed for. Great story, as usual, Thank You 5*****

"Do you want forgiveness? Look in the dictionary. Or try asking that God you used to worship when you were younger. You'll get none from me."

This was cold. I love it.

Great story!

A1 ending! Tyler’s first part of this story stinks!

Great story as always from saddletramp. Much much better than the original narrow view story.

Thanks for giving me/us some much needed closure to the original story. John

Another fine job

brighten to white. I hate monologue. keep to writing stories..fade to black.

Different, in some ways, but same all same all, ended up meeting another BEAUTIFUL girl, are there no ordinary looking girls in America.

Another Republican woman falls

From grace. Shame isn’t it.

one tough son of a bitch! Cold but well written.

Not one of his best, but has he says stuff u i do it my way

I guess I will never understand the people that read these 'Revenge ' stories. No two guys are going to react the same to a similar situation with a cheating wife, but all wives don't cheat the same way. Some are really dumb sluts, just out for something different, others are vindictive in wanting to hurt their husband, and there is probably hundreds more reasons for cheating. But, it makes for great stories, so no matter how the the guy reacts to it when he first fines out, it's how it ends that's important. Some guys are soft by nature, and try to stop or turn it around, other guys are hard, and when hurt by cheating, plan dastardly ways to get even. This guy was a bio-chemist and may have help things along, but you will never know. Good job. Great story line. Fair editing. Keep writing.

XYZ

The skank got her comeuppance

I rated both parts of this story a 3 star count because of the blatant contempt for the husband of whom had no say in any content. The second part did not come out the way I thought it should have, with her death of course, no one deserves that, even a blatant cheating spouse. She should have had the opportunity to regret her decisions long after the events of her unfaithfulness and in the face of intentional blasphemy towards her vows to her husband. Let's see an alternate ending, PLEASE. One that will rate 5 big stars of course.

'Wildbill

Both the wife and the husband showed no remorse, no love, and no emotion. I highly doubt the husband would've hadn't broken down in tears as she traipsed out the door knowing she was about to throw away her marriage and be fucked in a truck. I also doubt he would have calmly warned, "You'll regret your decision!" if he knew this disease-ridden asshole was going to fuck his wife. No, he would have been yelling something to the effect of "He has _____! Having sex with him will ultimately kill you!"

Also, if the husband knew the drinks were laced he would have confiscated them and pressed charges against the asshole. Also, he would have beat the shit out of the bully in subsequent trips back to the well.

Still, both stories accomplished what they'd meant to; The first part got the sissy little masochistic cucks hard, and yours stoked the rage of righteous indignation and revenge for everyone else.

Awesome! Lol loved it

After some of the horror stories I've seen in LW lately it's really refreshing to have ST set the world straight in his own inimitable style. Thanks ST!

Not bad, but it was a bit too far over the top for me to really enjoy it.

The final confrontation wasn't all that good and then of course it lacked the confrontation with Jules.

actions have consequences

My question is:do your readers really know how to read? This 'waltdee ' could not have read the same story I did. I'm not going to comment further on him, because he isn't worth it. I thought it was a great story line, well edited, Keep writing.

XYZ

Most amazing story. I gave it a 5. I love it, when a cheaters actions, come back to roost. Win, win, all the way around!

Quick and simple., bet so many men just wish this was what happened to them

How is it, in these stories the put upon husband always ends up with a beautiful woman,who just happens to be divorced?.

I love your work, whether it's all original from idea to posting, or a continuation of, sequel to, or re-imagination of the work of another, it's almost always a "5"...

...this one is too.

EastCoaster

It's not often I offer a negative review of your work as I am a long-time admirer of your creative imagination and your polished writing style--and so far as those two aspects of THIS story I again give them high marks. So...it is with personal regret (though it doesn't really matter to a writer of your talent) that I have to whole-heartedly agree with the comments of waltdee from his review of four months ago. The logic underlying his criticism (and mine) relates to the psychological state of the main characters at the time of the crisis in your original story. Sorry. Any HUMAN BEING observing another human being (much less a loved one--even one no longer close) about to UNKNOWINGLY commit suicide would at least scream out a REAL warning, not just..."gee whiz, babe, you're gonna regret this!"

On the other hand, I have to disassociate myself from waltdee's last run-on sentence. You wrote the story as you wished it to be. Readers' reactions are their own--all across the spectrum from rational to psychotic--which I'm sure you're used to by now.

As I said at the beginning--I greatly admire your work. So, thanks for your continuing contributions to this site and to my enjoyment.

An incurable STD that can be transmitted by contact with body fluids sounds dangerous. I hope you warned the hospice and crematorium staffs about the danger they were facing while taking care of Julia.

I found this to be avery good story of revenge and the BTB theme. Especially because the scorned husband had no hand whatsever and no way, no how in the fate the wife suffered. He warned her, she chose to ignore him. If he had told her about the disease she would have ignored that also because she would never believe anything he had to say. Her mind was made up to shame him by screwing the so called Alpha male. Remember he was being held at gun point when he tried to stop her. The ultimate penalty for a very bad decision. All actions result in consequences. 5 stars after my first read.

Great salvation taking on such a pile of crap and so skilfully crafting it into a good read, absorbing read.

Well done, thanks!

R.S.