All Comments on 'Reunion Pt. 01'

What happened to the other series???

Was contemplating on not writing for this site, yet a fan talked me out of it so I'm working on them. This and the other one was written before I was debating my choice.

A curious story, both because of how complex it seems to be how hot it is.

It is necessary to continue the series in order to be able to value more accurately.

5 * for you at the moment.

I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

please keep going with this, much more fucking to do yet

I really wish you would get an editor. Your stories are great, but they are difficult to read. Too many run on sentences, incorrect words, poor grammar and misspelled words. Editors are free and could help you turn these stories into masterpieces.

Hey I really enjoyed your story please finish it

He should hate the slut that his scum father was screwing and led to his Mother's death as well as his father. Second, what about his sister? How many was she fucking? Dad? younger brother? and of course eating her Mother out? Super tramp family.

What about his Boss and the recording? An interesting turn

Looking forward to the next chapter

Talking to an editor so this story and the son forced one's might be worked on soon.

When will part 2 come out

where is part 2?

Its done just waiting for the site to approve it should be out in a few days.

Can't think much past that. I've tried some of your other stuff but don't think I'll bother with more.

Bye bye then

Please get someone to edit your story. It's a hot mess in a bunch of areas!!!

Okay, just letting y'all know the 1&2 edited versions of this series have been submitted to lit so they should be up in a few days.

Well, the edited versions for 1&2 just got approved hope you enjoy them.

Your stories are just FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!! You get 5 Stars from me every time I read one of your works. Keep them coming and looking forward to your other stories that you've yet to continue. I still have more of your stories to read.

steal the whore away from his fther, get them to revile and leave him as well as Mark, and once they have nothing and no one dump thier asses too

Puzzling how fast you can forget what someone has done to you . He hated them moved away. Then in just a few days all is forgiven at the drop of a little pussy .

Other wise love your story I'll read more of your storyies

Great story. I will read more. Thanks for your time and imagination.

I was just rereading this story and realized I never commented on it. It was very well done and still holds up now.I guess some folks don't read well enough to understand why he hated them and that Anna explained why she and his father married so quickly. Great job on this one.

Why do you tend to write the protagonist a push over, instantly forgetting everything they have suffered through, once sex comes into the protagonist life everything is forgiven. And life is good again. No use in me reading the rest, I know where this is going. You seriously need to change it or stop writing it. The 3rd story I read of yours, in which your protagonist just simply rolls over and accepts it. Gave each story 1 star rating.

The starting point where they just showed up at Deans was a little bland but after Anna talked to Dean basically apologizing for causings Deans Mother's death,it was obvious she meant it and Dean forgave her.

As for Anna and Camilla,well maybe more for Camilla that there is more than lust she has for Dean,cause Camilla keeps talking about her date with Dean Friday,that right there tells me she may be in fact in love with Dean or the start of it.Now Anna I think she is more inn lust with Dean than love,but I could be wrong,will have to see in the next chapter.

Also when Anna went with her Daughter in the bedroom and Anna ate Camilla's pussy I knew they would work together to give Dean the attention he needs.Yes Camilla and Anna may be sluts but with time I think both could grow to love Dean completely.

Sorry, but I have to totally agree with subject117. There's no fucking way that this story should exist. I, along with most people, would have never let them in the front door to begin with.

hard to say dean's a pushover when he has all this hot pussy begging him. What's a guy to do?

But I got to agree with subject117 as well. I know it's your story so, you can write it anyway you want. But if you take a good look at a lot of your stories. The MC seams to wind up a push over. Not saying there isn't a place for it or people that enjoy it. But even though this is fantasy, readers expect at least some realism, emotionally if not physically. (unless it's in sci-fi or witches or something) Readers expect characters to react to things a certain way. So, if your MC is in a situation where he would be going against is morals, or at least debating the morality of a choice. They expect struggle, emotional turmoil, a fight (with himself if not the antagonist). Not the MC to say or think NO this is wrong I can't, only to be told yes or offered again, only to crumble like a house of cards on a beach during a hurricane. You could create the perfect character, looks, brains, heart, humble, and the perfect lover, someone that as they read the story EVERYONE can see, feel, understand, and pull for. But, if that character winds up a push over as described above, the character falls flat and becomes 2D. Even a 'The Man Booker Prize' award winning Author's story would suffer in that instance. Now, I am sure your not trying to be one, but every Author should want to improve. Just trying to help. I do really like your work, I always have. We've talked I hope this is received in the spirit it is given. Thanks

She lived with him since he was 6, hes now 24 according to timelinez “ "I think you know why."

"No, I don't, please I want to know why.” Anna said. So after 18 years they never talked about this?

He didnt want them at his house, then they offer to go to a hotel and he says no its fine stay? Why so wishy washy.

“ His mind just couldn't get past what happened yesterday, his dreams had been filled of his sister's naked body. ” he has so many girls that flirt with him he wants to keep away just one little girl seduced him and he starts dreaming?

“ Which she normally did around the office except around him, he just couldn't fathom why.” come on is this a dense inexperienced shy virgin? He got a sex call then she shows up for his attention.. his sis gave him a handjob and his mom played with his cock with her foot and he doesnt understand it all?

I like the story. AAAA++++

I really like the setups to your stories... but couldn't you write at least one, in which your Main Character isn't a massive pushover, who does whatever the women around him want? Especially since you set úp most of them as strong, independent persons... who then turn into submissive toys, as soon as they see so much as an exposed nipple!

Its so weak, i mean, Dean loved his mother, trying to keep every little item with a memory attached to them, hating his father and step family for a very long time, then he just opens up his home to them, because they are standing outside his house and let them do what ever they want in it. I get that he is thankful towards Camilla, but granting a kiss and a date that you supposedly hate and have hated for a very long time? and letting Anna steam-roll over him, taking his cock for granted. No, i don't see that happening to a strong-minded man. 3 stars for now, and i hope there are so twists in the plot further on.

"Ramza" and "Sarkasmus" I wholeheartedly i agree with you.

In each and every Story there are no consistent characters.

Can't you handle your thoughts Soul71.

I agree with other commenters in the assessment of your characters. The women are selfish and predatory, in a gross way, and your mc caves in way too easy. It’s way too rapey. And gross.