All Comments on 'Revealing Lilly Ch. 01'

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BradyBardBradyBardover 7 years ago
well done!

hey this is a really great story, i'm glad you didn't feel the need to tell what happens next. leaving the reader on a cliffhanger and letting them use their imagination is a great tool.

I also enjoyed in on a personal level. I have been somewhat involved in an online affair for a bit, but I never know what "poses" to send her. This story gives some enlightenment for a guy breaking into the sexting world. Thanks

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