by saddletramp1956
This series has been awesome, fun to follow, please keep up the good work and send us more stories from that imagination of yours. All the best to you and yours
I followed and read this story ,loved ,well done you tell a good tale.Thank you
Another awesome one from one of the best on here. May Saddletramp last another 20 years of writing. The DNA manipulation and gender transfer were great additions to this long story of Oscar and the Mmas.
Beautiful capstone to an amazing drama of a story!! I enjoyed every single installment! Kudos to you, sir, and I do hope you keep gracing us with your stories!
Loved it, good wrap up of the series, a bit light on the action, but overall it gave a good sense of closure. Any plans for a new gen MMAS series?
Another good one, I have read most of your stuff and enjoyed every single one... Trying to pace myself, I’m running out of authors... 😂🐷 Hoggypig out!
It has been an exciting “ride” with Oscar. I am glad it came to a good ending for him. Thanks for the great stories. I have enjoyed them all!
That was a great ending. As with all your stories this was a definite 5 stars.
Another hit. Long indeed and a few typos but considering the length of this I feel it's justified. Held my attention and I was eager to keep reading.
I have to admit, that by the end of page 2, I was thinking to myself that this couldn't be an ST story. I was already considering 3-stars (more in respect for the author than the story). How foolish of me to forget the nasty twists and turns that ST manages to come up with in his stories. Page 3 turned the tide and the following pages, once again, made me a lover of his stories. Thank you once more and 5-stars from me!
Thank you SaddleTramp for one of the best series on LW. And congratulations on your 200th posting. Hope for many more.
My interest in this story ended with the news of the "end of the EPA". Obviously the author is from another planet and knows little of life before the EPA and is confused about the way Democracy works.
Great story and series. I was a little surprised that Oscar did not have Chambers checked for a poison pill.
Thanks for writing.
Awesome end to the epic career of Director Oscar Warren. Five Star effort once again!
What a wonderful way to wrap up Oscar’s tale. Thanks for posting another fun read.
I hope this comment will be seen by only saddletramp1956 and never be read by others. That being said this was
another near perfect tale of the MMAS but to this poor reader there is an easy solution to this terroristic group that seem both simple and effective.
Use mass media in the form of PSA or even the bothersome infamous robocall tactic to send out, using limited coverage, the notification that "Your services are no longer needed." The task force could also direct this message to suspected members as a preemptive strike.
My apology for not having a member name/page.
Great story I like the way you tied the new world order campaign into it and it was defeated thank God. Send Chambers sounds a lot like a crazy Senator from California. Thank you for sharing
Riveting.
That is what I thought after I finished reading this in one sitting.
I seldom do that on LW stories.
Great job ST1956.
Taking the erotic out of Literotica. Now maybe you can use your talent for something better.
Too bad you retired Oscar. The stories about and with the task force were a real highlight! Thank you for your excellent work! 5+!!!
That finish was unexpected, and fully in line with what I expected from saddletramp. I like an ending with a final unanticipated twist, and Alex/Alexis was all of that. Good as usual ST, bring on the next one, wherever it takes us.
Fantastic Story! I get the feeling in My Water that this is not the last We'll read about Oscar? 5🌟👍😁
Never a dull moment when reading any of SaddleTramps stories! Loved it as I have all your stories. Thank you again ST. 5 BIG FAT SHINY STARS!
I was waiting for his wife to bite his cock of at the end and say ‘Long live MMAS’. Very glad she didn’t though. Outstanding as always, 5 stars 😉
Another well written story. Your stories are always a joy to read. 5🌟5🌟5🌟5🌟5🌟
Everything wrapped up neatly and tied up with a bow. This was a big project, and the author carried it off pretty well. I suspect there are far more men guilty of abusing women than this series impkied about the number of women who are so angry at their spouses they choose to torture, maim, and murder them. But once I suspended disbelief for that premise, thne rest was a pretty rollicking action. story.
10 stars again for Mr Saddle Tramp! Whoa, where do get the ideas for stories like this. This story is Amazing, complex, and you still get all the bases covered plus the "Good Guys wins! I love a "Happy Ending"! Thank You Mr ST for some of the Greatest Stories and Greatest writing on Literotica. Your Story telling is Fantastic Sir. If I could write 1/10th as good as you it would be amazing. I'd retire just to write. Thanks so Much.
Justice rides and Rules, you should put the entire Revenge in Advance series on Amazon.com under the Kindle Unlimited section. It should be made available to a larger audience!
This was a great series and I enjoyed it immensely. Now, on to the next one.
Another well-ll written tale with excellent character development and story line, I initially found the plot to be a bit too unbelievable and almost stopped reading but decided to explore it a bit further, as being an avid fan of yours I figured I hadn't given the plot enough of a a chance yet and besides, it's "your" story, not mine. Of course, it wasn't much further in that the plot began to seem believable and capture my rapt attention. Therefore, once again, I thank you for another very enjoyable read!
A neat ending to the story of Oscar Warren -- wonderfully entertaining throughout.
I enjoyed this series. Very thought-provoking and scary with that whole radical femdom stuff. Male or female, no one should treat another the way that was portrayed here. That shit was just sadistically cruel.
I find it amusing that in a lot of these LW stories some wives think a great punishment for their husbands' cheating is to force them to watch the wife getting fucked and filled by various guys. Those wives should be divorced and cut loose. Why, you may ask? Well clearly they are OK with fucking random guys as long as it serves a purpose to them. This means they don't hold their vows in high regard nor do they have much regard for their own integrity, if they're willing to debase themselves in such a way for the purposes of revenge. As such, they only prove that they aren't really all that great of a person, no better than the cheater they're punishing, and not someone you'd want to be in a relationship with.
Great story, ‘Tramp. Not just this last chapter but the whole series. Thanks for sharing it. I have to say, that Universe of yours has a lot of pretty strange stuff going on in it. If it were to happen that your personal Universe and the Universe we all exist in were to somehow merge, things would probably get a helluva lot more “Interesting”. Wouldn’t that be a bitch!?
Scary! Great fiction, though, definitely a fun read. Five stars
I read it twice. Not because I wanted to, but because I had to. The chapters were scrambled. If you had labelled the chapters “part 1” and “part 2”, they would have alphabetized in sequence. But by using random alpha subtitles, they alphabetized in random order. Once I realized the problem, I went back and re-read everything using the submission dates as a guide. Having done that, I can say this was a good story
Enjoyed the series.
As previously described the chapters show up out of order. No matter if you sort alphabetically or by newest. Plus the one entitled "Revenge in Advance: Pat" show up separately outside of the list of chapters. So reading them in the order presented causes confusion.