All Comments on 'Revenge is a Steaming Bowl of Mom'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Fantastic!

I'd love to read the sequel...

Diecast1Diecast1almost 3 years ago

where is chapter 2. AAA+++

TheOldStudTheOldStudover 1 year ago

Very nice, but it begs for a part 2...

donaldelliott11donaldelliott11about 1 year ago

I really enjoyed this. Even though you clearly had no idea what the ending would be and so just sort of quit.

MfkndragonMfkndragon11 months ago

Well it sounded interesting until I started reading it honestly it's simple if the wife isn't screwing around as well and the guy it's cheating as far as the dad screwing the sons girlfriend you should have wrote in the animosity that will arise between the 2 like maybe something that looks to lead to a fight to have a good example of that read two hours two mom the rage I'm not saying an actual fight like in that story but something that looks like it's heading to 1 before the mother steps in that would have added the realistic standpoint to the story as it wrote there was no realistic standpoint sorry not even in a fantasy story is the dad going to suggest a swap like that and while a fantasy story don't have to be completely realistic they do have some realistic points in them every good fantasy story does

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

My Dad's penis is larger than mine, so I knew my college girlfriend would enjoy it. What I didn't realize was that I would enjoy slurping his cream pies. Once I drank my father's essence, then Mom got horny for me too. Win/win.

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