by rpsuch
The unfolding of the two stories of how Sunny met Louis is just great. We already knew Ashley and Jeff, but the cleaned up version was well done. Can't wait until the next chapter is released.
The story needs to have some conflict and a faster pace.
This chapter could have gone in Humor/Satire (as well as some of the rest of the story). I was laughing out loud (I'm alone) by the time I finished it.
Obviously 5 stars.
Paul in Oklahoma