All Comments on 'Rewiring a Recalcitrant Daughter Ch. 02'

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ironsoldier80ironsoldier80almost 7 years ago
Dr Wong's sex toys

There's your overall title. Some ideas, Genesis of a sex toy. A story about total abuse of Dr Wong's technique. And how about a male sex toy?

This has lots of potential whether you keep Dr Wong as an overriding backgrounds character or bring him into the light as a main character. Good luck

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Agh. Did you have to bring our finance minister into it? Total squick for me, there.

MaryAndersonMaryAndersonalmost 7 years agoAuthor
First I had to look up

squick, but meant no offense to New Zealand. Used it because my image of men from that nation is rugged and good looking. You should have heard my mother talk about them after her vacation there.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
SUPERB STORY... FASCINATING, SOOOO EROTIC

Just keep sharing your "fertile" imagination with us, please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Wow

Nice work! Tons of detail. It was truly wonderful. Going to check out your other stories now!

clitlicker4uclitlicker4ualmost 7 years ago
Thought it was awesome

But I still think the 3 best words in sex are " Fuck me Daddy "

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

ну и мерзость...

ToughSailorToughSailor2 months ago

Got so repetitious that I couldn't get past pp2 . . . .

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