by knightfantasies
Hope you continue the story with Wendy and Kylie.
Sherry is a DOWNER.
She hurts the entire story. I should have dropped the score to a TWO.
You made Jeff a jerk.
I don't understand the comments about how suddenly Jeff becomes a jerk in this chapter. He's been using women for his pleasure with little remorse before this chapter. Now Jeff has an older women who is willing to be his whore. Why is he a jerk for taking her? I say keep the chapters, and us, cumming!
Hate this chapter get rid of sherry
i understand Jeff is a bit of an asshole. but i think thats his character. i gave it 5 stars - and look forward to reading more
Didn't fix it with this chapter again do you not know the meaning of incest I should quit reading at this point there is no way you can fix this and everyone saying this is such a great story is either lying to you or there Idiots who have no idea what a good story is this is possibly the worst fantasy story I have ever read and I've read some horribly bad stories