by knightfantasies
Great story can definitely see this being a long and very good series. Please for the love of god continue this story
An exceptional read. Hot as hell. Potential for many roads. Perhaps sister begins lactating?
This story is for sure a great start to a series. I hope you continue write more.
Enjoyed your story, could open up to a mimi series of stories but thats down to you.
I look forward to any future stories with great zest.
Thanks 5*
What an interesting phone app.
The sex was awesome.
Are you going to keep the chapter?
I liked this one a lot but thought it a shame that you spent so much time on the sister's masturbation and so little time describing their lovemaking. Very sexy though! Thank you.
I was going to say 'Short, but oooh so sweet!', but then, hello!! What's this? Oh ho!! Four more chapters waiting for my insemenation, er I mean enjoy your desemenation! Hehe, write on! :)
i really enjoyed reading this. i'm glad you're continuing to write this series - i'm not sure i would have found it except for your recent post. VERY SEXY!! Wow. i can't wait to read the next chapter.
Didn't find any grammatical errors, good build up of characters, and a believable storyline. Can't possibly imagine thinking of anything to say negative. A perfect short story. BRAVO!!!! (do it again)!!!
I highly recommend you read the entire series. It is full of all the nasty sex you want and while some human emotions are revealed, they do not big the story line down. Varied sex and physical descriptions keep your mind in play.
You DO NOT take anything out of your ass and put it in your mouth or vagina....EVER! The rate of infection is dangerously high.
As soon as I read Wendy "cleaning" her fecal covered dildo with her mouth it was a definite turn-off.
AWESOME chapter One
Excellent start For a brother and sister.
Can’t wait for the next episode.
Need sweet beginning