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Anonymousabout 19 years ago

This misses the mark by a whisker...

"...the wild dance of the many flames, drawn in by their hypnotic movement." Is just one example of the changes that would have saved the occasional stumbles that occur in this story. It's so close. Please, keep working at it. Greatness is around the corner.

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