All Comments on 'Rising From The Fire Ch. 01'

Love the whole heaven hell lore genre.

So many possibilities to make up anyone you want, that's a new one Adam an angel, after what he did.

Would love to read more

This is definatly different and creative concept. Interesting character. I can't wait to read more.

I'm impressed. You must have a really vivid imagination to come up with such an original story. And you are a new writer which is even more impressive. I can't wait to see what happens next, so please hurry with your next posting. And I must say good luck with your writing career, you appear to be off to a fantastic start.

Good job.

I would HOPE TO HELL that you meant 'silicone' not silicon. (it's also 'fireproof', I think). Silicon is, too, but makes no sense in your story.

Technially, Adam was God's creation, not his son, it gets religious as all HELL but, like I said, creation, not son. You're getting into a whole 'nother thing if you want to talk abut Jesus, which I'D LEAVE IT THE HELL ALONE IF I WERE YOU. This is not a place to discuss RELIGION!

Pun intended ... Makes me wish Adam ould come along and give THIS little hellion a glas of Bliss before making me cum untl my brain melts ..LOVED IT! A five isn't really enough.