All Comments on 'Rituals'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Fantastically written.

4/5; which for me is unusual seeing as how it involves a bored, cheating wife. For the record, rituals are what keep us sane. They provide a backstop in an otherwise chaotic world. If she was so bored with hers, why not take up parachuting or mountain climbing?

nixroxnixroxover 2 years ago

1 star - English is obviously not your first language.

This one is bad enough that I won't waste my time reading any more.

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Reading between the lines - it is the curse of every writer and the duty of every reader. Erotica without porn is just tawdry fiction. Porn without erotica is just boring. My reaction to porn films is as follows: after the first ten minutes, I want to go home and screw. Afte...