by IrreverentRev
I hope the next chapter doesn't take another 2 years again. Had to read the whole thing all over again.
Great, albeit short chapter. With many writers of extended series, they make the mistake of filling their work with repetitive sex/love scenes and only minimal movement of the plot. The last couple chapters have been pretty effective at mixing it up with hot sex and decent plot progression. It looks like we are a 2-3 chapters away from the "Great Event", exciting times! 5*
Please get another chapter soon. I am really hooked on the story I want to get more background filled in. I would read this story with or without the sex. You're doing a great job, just keep it coming.
WHA...WHA..WHA....WWWHHHAAATTTTTT???!!! This ended here, just like that??!! You are a cruel one...and NO new chapter in sight!!
Wwwwhhhhyyyyyyyy??????
Still, Five**5**Stars...
This story has kept me reading for the last several hours. Keep them coming
Hi all! Chapter 10 is coming along, but it's a complex chapter. I'm not sure I like how it's going.
Thank you I’ve read all nine chapters and anxiety waiting for the next. I like your sense of humor I laughed till I cried. I love the setting of the story it think it is my favorite area.