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x0xF0RC3DPL3ASUR3x0xF0RC3DPL3ASUR3over 16 years ago
AHmazing, as usual.

It could've been better, but you still uphold your standards. Love your stories, babe. Ciao!

Hugger_MuggerHugger_Muggerover 12 years ago
Good Idea, But Could be Better

There are still a fair number of grammar errors and typos, so definitely go over it with that in mind. Patricia could be more resistant, especially at first. I did not buy that she would flash her tits at them so quickly. Let the tension build and have the boys escalate their requests until they force the issue.

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