All Comments on 'Robbie's Mother'

Hope you intend to continue with this story.

But the ending was rushed. You built the sexual tension very well and the transition was going nicely, but you could have made a lot more of the ending.

I like your writing style and look forward to reading more of your output.

Hope to read more. Good stuff!

I think I'm going to pay mom a visit next week while she's all alone & see if I can recreate my teen years.

I love the story!!! I hope there more chapters to come?

Please keep this story going, I would love to read about mum and a baby bump

The only thing missing were bullet points at the beginning of your paragraphs. I thought I was reading a procedure manual. I stopped reading halfway through the first page. No rating from me.

That was beyond great! A little more detail and buildup at the end would have definitely put it over the top!

One of my favorites for sure!

Many moms tease sons by 'accidental" flashes and other seemingly innocent actions. .It does make mom feel sexy and desirable knowing son jerks off for her. Quite often a mom will confront son and make him show her what he does..

Wow, I would like to see more of this story please, keep up the good work.

After finally making love mom and I had many discussions on our 3 years of teasing. Only then did we realize how close we were so many times.

Too late now. Mom teaching son could be very erotic. I would 😍 to read more.

A great start. Let's hope this one keeps rolling until Robbie's mother gets pregnant. Maybe they can then run off somewhere new and live as a family ?

I'm not trying to be harsh here, please consider this as constructive criticism.

The story is too short. You get to the sex way too fast and without a proper build-up. It gives a wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am feel, which is okay if this was a pornhub video clip. There needs to be more depth, more description of the characters and how they gradually bring themselves to that final situation. This is an incest theme, that doesn't work convincingly with so much missing growth within the story.

Also, thoughts expressed in double quotation marks seem like spoken words which is confusing. There are plenty of ways to differentiate thought from speech when writing a story.