All Comments on 'Robert: Requited Loves'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
True to life

The incest element is so true to life.,I half expected Lila to be some sort of relative.Overall a good story from an experienced author and also scope for a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
GUT

very nice story..thx.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Stirring

Great story. Whilst reading it I felt a slight stirring & thats never happened before. As always, I love reading your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Personally

I'd like to see a serial on this one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
good but

good but please keep better track of what you write in the begining you say he was injured and unable to continue in the military then you say he was exempt from service due to his job if the injury kept him from continuing in the military it would have kept him out of the war also stop confusing the reader by contradicting yourself get an editor and reread your stories several times before posting

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice Story

Wow! Initiation of the young male by the older, beautiful nymphomaniac; incest with a gorgeous redhead, no less; and a threesome with both! Lots of fantasies and taboos satisfied with this one! Only thing I can think to add is a nice big clitoris that loves to be fondled and sucked!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Response to "good butt"

Anybody who was around during Vietnam knows that having been washed out of one of the Academies as "unfit" was absolutely no impediment to being drafted. Heck, I saw a draftee arrive from Chicago whose whole leg was held together by steel braces---He literally had no knee at all, and yet the examining station in Chicago passed him. He was sent back to Chicago, but conditions that disqualified men in previous wars (flat feet, heart problems, spinal curvature, for example) were "No problem; move along, Soldier!" Face it: we were cannon fodder and they figured by the time the Gooks finished with us, nobody could tell whether we had deformities or not. (Our corpses would probably be missing significant body parts anyway.)

Do you think I sound mad? Hell yes. Forty years later I still hate them sumbitches (I mean the US politicians who sent 58,000 of us to die but didn't intend for us to win).

Problem is: now I'm so mad I won't be able to sleep.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Timeline...

He says he was five in 1945, so he was born in 1940. Then he says he was studying computer classes in community college when he left the Academy, so he was what, 22? Did they even have computers in 1962 in community colleges, or even singles bars such as Lila refers to when he was 18, in 1958? The first desktop computer didn't come out until 1975, by which time he would be 35, this story is poorly researched and deeply unrealistic, no stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
computers

To begin, it was mentioned govt. programming contractor. As the govt. was about the only major player that could afford those monsters. IBM, Sperry Univac, card punch, and large magnetic tape spools. I should know, visited major AF computer center at their Logistics Center. Maybe you should do a bit of research yourself.

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