by Bh76
They went around Robin Hood's barn and ended up married and with a family.I especially liked when he asked her to go for counciling , it proved he loved her, and she proved hers by starting a family with the man she loved- her husband. Please write another chapter for this, WONDERFUL STORY
Very good read would of liked it to be about longer but still very good.
Super great twist. I loved it!
Once again, thank you so much for writing, and even more for sharing your work.
Really good one.....Loved the KISS connection brings back some serious memories... Course I was really a Beach Boys/Santana/Crosby Stills Nash and Young type.... Good love story though
I enjoyed the story, but was slightly disappointed that the author didn't manage to slip a Gene Simmons tongue/cunnilingus joke in somewhere.
Great story, enjoyed it so much. Being from those years brought back some awesome memories. Awesome job!
Great story but I never got into Kiss. They seemed to me to be a bunch of high paid sissy freaks, lol Queers! Clowns! Aliens from another planet! That was a long time ago. Anyway, how 5 stars for a great story? Five it is then!
Sad, you've done great stuff this before.The main character?? Going to a Kiss concert in a Led Z shirt is just one of those dumb things. John is an arrogant assuming asshole. When he's in his 40's, weighing 350 pounds, he'll expect his wife to bring him another beer when he burps loudly, exclaiming to his equally obnoxious beer buddies that his utterly stupid wife is lucky to have him the, king plumber, to clean out her pipework. 4 stars cause you can do better
Maybe it's a Midwest thing for adults to be into Kiss. To anyone on the East coast over the age of 12, they were a joke. A 23 year old man would more likely be into the Ramones or the Talking Heads.
Fun story! I’m not a big Kiss fan & yes I prefer Zeppelin but that’s not the point; you can insert any favorite band or singer the story was great.
Liked the story. Those bands and music were after my time so they were never my thing. But to each their own and it is what it is. Seems like I've heard that in a couple of your stories lol.
Why are most American teens so sex crazed!! Then weak wimps like John become infatuated with these whores
Weird arsehole comments. Whilst it's true that Led Zeppelin are better than Kiss, that doesn't mean Kiss are shit. Good story. Thank you
I like the part where he ran away from her in the parking lot. He barely knew her, what a wuss lol
ROTFLMAO…My best friend was a Kiss fan. I used to laugh at Kiss fans. Sadly there are so few left to laugh at…I don’t think my friend admits to being a Kiss fan in his youth…(and The Rockets was a much better band.)
I believe the last draft was in 1971 and they didn’t draft very many that year.
Starchild’s name is Paul Stanley in case you are wondering, Ace was a cat if I recall correctly and the asshole was Gene Simmons. Can’t recall the drummer’s name, even though he wrote their only hit song, Beth...and maybe he was the cat (the walrus was Paul). He wised up and left the band before they became an even bigger joke than they already were…basically The New York Dolls with an AMAZING marketing led by the aforementioned asshole, Simmons. Sorry, Autist, Kiss really is/was shit. When your lunch boxes outsell your records that’s kinda the very definition of crap.
WOW…Anon from 5 months before me made ALL my points.
Well, most…
Peter Kris’s - Drummer
1971 last draft although they drew numbers in 1973…no draft.
EVERY band was better than Kiss, The Cowsills included, hell, even the Partridge Family had better songs.
I don’t think snow blowers were a thing in 1973.
It would’ve been a MUCH better story if you cut the silly sex scenes and told us how the MC cut off the step-father’s balls.