All Comments on 'Roman Holiday Ch. 11'

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impo_61impo_61over 8 years ago
A sad story, but make me laugh...

A sad story, but make me laugh...When the lover said after slamming his fist on the vanity: "Don't you have any self respect? You really are a slut."!!! A man that was fucking for a long time another man's wife, saying this is just to laugh...1*

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Put This somewhere where only the dogs can find it

Anywhere but loving wives... The bitch is neither

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More awful crap

Just drek and drivel

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Please stop writing.

You simply can't write. No ifs, ands or buts. This was just as bad as the previous chapters. Look at the score. NOBODY likes this. AWFUL!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
a very good LW story

I voted you a 5

CitySatyrCitySatyrover 8 years ago
Keep it going.

I am enjoying the eroticism and complexity of this developing story very much. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Root Canal...

Is more erotic than this drivel.On what planet would Roland want to stay married to the village bike and to make it worse he doesn't ever get to ride it.Sad Really sad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I dont understand those guys..

she is the perfect whore, so why not making big money by selling her cunt and ass? She obviously is willing to fuck everyone and everything. And that idiot Roland? May be you can also sell at least his ass - as he is no good for anything else.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Excellent story

Well done - I just loved your story.

Don't listen to the pathetic negative comments. I actually feel sorry for them as they feel that writing such vitriol makes theirs lives happier.

Please keep writing - great stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
" I think the same is true for cuckolds and slutwives!"

And for incels (closet cucks) like you brokenpeter since celibate geldings, thankfully, don't reproduce.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Another whore loving wife and pathetic cuck story from wannabe writers

Supreme cuck#💩💩

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Sorry

I feel sorry for anyone who thinks this is an excellent story, or even a story at all.

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