All Comments on 'Romance on the High Sea'

LOVE your style and story lines. You have the talent (experience?) to focus on feelings and relationships, while still adding a very realistic sexual side. However, in real life there is much more to the sex and details you should expand on. Still, I love your stories ;-)

Short and sweet. 5 stars. We could use a little more detail in what they are thinking and their lives and experiences. It doesn't have to be long. A few more paragraphs would be nice. You show potential as a writer.

Knowing when a story is "Goldilocks", just right, is hard to learn. "Attractive woman": why not describe her? What turned you onto her?