All Comments on 'Romantic Wife and Girlfriend Swap'

by Gorgeous_George

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CWS92102CWS92102almost 4 years ago
Style of writing

I might be in the minority, But, I like this style of writing - I would like to see more of the same.

Cannot wait for Chapter Two.

DunkirkDunkirkalmost 4 years ago

Please give us more of this story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Fantastic loving

Fantastic story, people loving thire partner but loving extra sex with no guilt. Looking forward to next story.

Gorgeous_GeorgeGorgeous_Georgealmost 4 years agoAuthor
Thanks. There's more!

Thank you for your kind comments.

I am brand new to writing, so am very encouraged by what you had to say.

The morning after is now published here:

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-morning-after-swapping-romance

If you have any suggestions for character development, that would be great!

Cheers

GG

roveroneroveroneover 3 years ago

WOW! So hot...LOVED it...!

And, as a yank that worked around limeys,/kiwis/aussies for years in Bermuda, also love the liberal use of cunt... a forbidden word for many, in the States....

Strong 5, and fave, and just read your note about morning after...

discobobdiscobobover 3 years ago

well written, well paced,, very erotic,,,people can certainly love more than one person at a time,,dont believe we were ever meant to be monogamous,,just a means of controlling society.

tkh3nkey2110tkh3nkey2110over 3 years ago
Really HOT!

A really fun night was had by all. No one is hurt and everyone had a blast. A fun sexy story. I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Tried to enjoy it, but the cuckolding ruined it for me.

Bill

MADDOGINTEXASMADDOGINTEXASabout 2 years ago

Oh, Bill...what ccuckoldingc are you talking about??!! This is two couples swapping, sharing in the presence of each other...no one was left out...I guess you have never had the pleasure of this, or even a dam threesome with someone you care for (and NO male contact...eeewww!!!)

I loved this story...had my own fun when I was younger, wish I knew someone my wife and I trusted enough to do this. Quite a step to give yourself over like this, with another couple...but would be fun with right people...like this story shows!

**5**Stars...looking to read the sequel, now...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The guy should shoot himself he is a fucking idiot. The writer is just as bad we get it the character I. Your story is a crook complain not satisfied with anything or anyone that was clear in the first two paragraphs you didn't need to drag it out 3000 words and bore everyone

Gorgeous_GeorgeGorgeous_Georgeover 1 year agoAuthor

These kind of comments always come from someone called "Anonymous" - must be quite a busy guy!

olblueyesolblueyes11 months ago

its a short tale but ive read it a number of times,,it just totally turns me on,,must be something i identify with!

Gorgeous_GeorgeGorgeous_George10 months agoAuthor

Glad you enjoyed it, man! There is a sequel!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Wow

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