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by AfterDusk

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KingBandorKingBandorover 5 years ago
Felt incomplete

This did not seem like a complete story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I want more!

LoquiSordidaAdMeLoquiSordidaAdMeover 5 years ago
I think that was a twist at the end

Was he really a male prostitute? Or was it just kinky dirty talk? I'm not clear. I think it was a surprise ending that I didn't see coming. I know you were limited to 750 words, but you sort of front loaded the story and ran out of words at the end. I would have liked a more explicit ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Please complete the series

please complete the first death series its my favorite story in literorica.

jimjam69jimjam69about 4 years ago
Okay

Leaves me a little lacking.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Nothing really there. Kind of stupid.

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I write things. Sometimes I share them here, but maybe only less than 20%. Yes, I know I have a few unfinished stories...and I will finish them all, eventually. I appreciate the time you take to read my musings; please vote and leave a constructive comment. As the saying...