All Comments on 'Room Mates Pt. 07'

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cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 9 years ago
Really good.

I liked seeing Sam come out of her shell and hope that Jake can show her an emotion other than lust. The characters are likeable and I enjoy their budding relationship but I was a little disturbed by the "Never say no to me" comment. I like dominant men but that was straddling the line between dominance and nonconsent. Hoping that you take to story past the consummation to the happily ever after.

Looking forward to more!

Board_StiffBoard_Stiffover 8 years ago
Engaging & Hot!!!

Wow, this story has had me from the first chapter. Your characters have developed and blossomed as the story has progressed. What were just names in the beginning are now something I care about. Excellent job.

The sex is hot and is brought to life through your words. Your ability to paint a provocative picture keeps this story spicy and as a reader I want more!

Great job. I don't usually leave comments until the end, but I couldn't help it this time. Great job, know I will be partaking of your entire catalog now and looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

This is way too underrated. Fucking hot and amazing!

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