by CateJ
I am hoping for a happy ending for Jake and Sammie. But it's your prerogative. Cheers.
But who cares? Unlikeable characters made this uninteresting to read. And get an editor. The dialogue was juvenile at best.
Olivia's child is not Jake's. He wouldn't do that to Sammie. Send Olivia for a DNA test, then send her packing. She herself has alluded to the fact that she is rather promiscuous and that she doesn't know that father's identity. Keep Jake and Sammie loving each other and growing together!
Unnecessary foul language in the dialogue, it was too forced to be rightfully used. Not one likeable character and Sammy is a fucking coward, she 'loves' him but never told him she couldn't have kids? And whats with his sister telling him? Wasn't her place to!
Please tell me that this isn't the last part of the story! That Sammie would just leave seems to me to be out of character and weird after all she and Jake shared - but as an ending to the entire story, I would find it super disappointing.