by orie
One of the most well-written stories in recent memory! I am looking forward to the next chapters to find out where you're going with this story. Please keep the chapters coming!
Very good writing. It might be a plan to branch out, do a loving wives story, as you will get a lot more comments,(good and bad) and probably a lot more readers.
I thought the dialog and characterizations were excellent, I cared about the characters. If there is a part 3, he should recognize DIdo on the street, enterint her apartment house, and end up fucking him.
Chilley,
Wonderful stories...can't wait for chapter 3. It has me really going. What's next?
These are among my favorites...bit of a different story...well told!!!! looking forward to reading on!
Totally enjoyed this story. Well thought out and very erotic. Thank you
I have enjoyed reading parts 1 & 2 and look forward to reading the next one's. Excellantly constructed stories. A.F.C. Somerset.
An exhilarating read. Hope Ferry comes back, understandable she would be upset after what happened before. i like her character. Voyeurism and exhibitionism rate highly on my favourite things. Like a good book this is not something to put down, on to the next chapter.
Really enjoying the story, although I must say, as you were writing it, I was surprised at his confession and offer at the dinner table to teach tai chi in the nude to the strangers, even though they were gay, it would still have been stupid and inconsiderate in front of his date. Especially as he was very much attracted to her. It’s not like he wasn’t a smart guy in fact a lawyer, so no excuse to not have thought the consequences. And why not tell her beforehand and then tell them. For me a slightly weak story line to be honest , but let’s see what you do with it all in all still five stars.