All Comments on 'Room w View Ch. 03'

there was passion and confusion as real life goes and it made me reflect back on my complex life.... great job of sucking me into your world... definitely keep writing

Will there be more? I sure hope so! Good start.

Well a bit bizzar, what with the exhibitionist kink, but interesting, and I look forward to your finish of the story. Shame you had to burn the girlfriend, but it doesn't sound like she is a good match sexually for him.

chilley

Orie,..have read all 3,..could not put down. I love your writing, and hope it continues with 'room with a view 4,..5...etc! Ferry come back!!!

As one who has no problems with E & V I'm somewhat confused but I'm enjoying the storyline.

This has all the conflicted desires that make real life so complex and difficult.

I enjoyed the tension about finding something new that couldn't be let go of, yet afraid to tell significant but judgemental people, for fear they wouldn't (and didn't) understand.

This is something which I experienced a short while before my divorce.

Keep up the great work, your mind is fascinating.

But an idiot perv...!

Very well done, great story. Thanks for your efforts.

Awh...how I wished Ferry could understand.

You have me sucked in.

:) Josie

Well done.... your story continues to hold me....good plausibility. A.F.C.Somerset.

I would just like to say I fucking called that her name was Diana when she picked Artemis as her alias. And I'm invested as hell in this story

I am really enjoying the story, but still find it hard to believe someone so smart as Kyle would be so stupid to leave his phone with his girlfriend, knowing he gets sexed pictures on it. There was no need to leave his phone either. He could’ve answered just as easily as her. I think that was pretty poor way too get to a point better for him to have told her and she can’t accept it rather than a quick cut and dry lame excuse. Still going to carry on reading and see how the story goes, but we should’ve done this a different way .