All Comments on 'Room w View Ch. 05'

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arrowglassarrowglassover 9 years ago
Love this one!

So looking forward to the next installment. Enjoy the way you tell the story with passion...with characters with character...!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Can't wait!

Terrific story with great characters. Keep 'em coming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Blown away! (Pun intended ;) )

I started reading this story at around midnight cause I was horny and wanted to relieve that tension before I went to bed...It is now 3:35 am and I am still reading...One more chapter and I'm current! It's bittersweet, I've grown attached to all of these characters so much it's crazy...I even got teary eyed towards the end of this :/ I hope this story doesn't end anytime soon!!! Big fan here! :)

maddictmaddictabout 9 years ago
Better than Good.

"Strip for me Kyle" ( Maddict ). TMI my stomach knotted up. I'm Kyle in this story. Hope that doesn't screw it up for anyone else. Great mix of story and sex I want to know what happens to all of our charecters. The two couples, Henry, Ferry , Kyle, Diana, Fanny! I think we are in capable hands. Loved the show Madmen, the creator Matt Weiner wwas concerned about ending the show and leaving the characters there forever. He knows it won't please everone, but the fact he cared so much for his story means a lot.

Thank you for your story, glad I'm finding the better authors here, * bookmark!

ProfDavrosProfDavrosabout 9 years ago
Oh so good

Real people have complex lives not fairy stories. I love the development of this group of people, the many possibilities for the future, the pain with the pleasure, both intense.

Can't wait to read more, and would live to see the movie!

BoyertownBoyertownabout 6 years ago

Hmmm ... I have never been immersed in a story as much or as deep as this. You have ensnared me and have made me feel as if your characters are real. Hmmm ...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Let me echo the same.

I'm falling for Kyle, really want him to find that one person who can thruly connect with him and give him the emotional love he's so longing for.

Josie

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
as usual

I just love the way you are building your story.....courteous sex ..and hints to the future. A.F.C. Somerset

DadiesdreamsDadiesdreamsabout 1 month ago

How about that as we know life can be a bitch and so in love. Beautifully written though and more realistic than most. He’s just starting out in a career that is taking 12 hours a day of his life and she is more mature but also a serious business woman travelling the world, but maybe the daughter. Will see with Ferry but she’d have to open her mind a little bit sexually as gorgeous as she seems she’s a little bit too straight and narrow for him. I think that wasn’t a pun

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