All Comments on 'Room with a View'

Fuck u Motherfucker

Any chance of using the camera to make a video? We could all see her then!

you hate women that much? think all women are stupid? you're a sad little man.

The only thing you didn't do was make the guy black

Your story was very good. Highly erotic. Constructive criticism, personally, I don't like the "c" word. Everything else as far as details, fantasy, storyline, was very hot! I've fantasized about having unprotected sex with another man while my husband watches or participates. We've talked about it but probably will never act upon it. BUT the thought process is there nonetheless. Kudos and keep writing this type of story.

Thanks.

xoxox

Katie

I knew I wouldn't like the "story" when I saw the "writer" didn't know squat about grammar, spelling, punctuation and other mysteries (even in his description of the story), but I managed to keep from puking until I got into the first few paragraphs. At that point, seeing how poor a job the writer did with dialogue, I quickly gave up. Does this “writer” think people actually talk like that to each other? LOL I read a little further to make sure this “writer” doesn’t have a clue how to describe erotic action but then I just scrolled down to the end and gave it the lowest scores possible. Nothing after the point where I stopped reading could have salvaged this piece of crap so I feel good about awarding zeros where I could. What a pity the scale doesn’t include negative numbers.

not worth reading.

Couldn't even give this a 25 because of how poorly it was written along with such a lame story. Bad grammar, spelling, punctuation all messed up. Either work on your writing or give it up!

Get real. You knew what this story was about before you read it. DON'T READ THEM IF YOU DON'T LIKE THESE KINDS OF STORIES. You are messing up a fine erotic story site.

No speculation here as this was just a sick cuckster without any self respect pimping out the soon to be mother of someone else's bastard baby for wimpus to raise. How erotic - no just freaky sick male humiliation.<P>

Why do some new writers feel this is arousing to semi-normal people? This was by and for sicko's into spreading their own embarrassment of being below the subhuman line.<P>

Perhaps the writer misjudged the audience here - or not. Regardless this sucked for anyone who isn't jadedly abnormal.<P>

Writer, perhaps you are better this - or not?

Why do people keep reading these stories if they don't like them. Insanity can be defined by doing the same thing over and over and expecting a different result.

These people talk about wimps etc, but they probably get bitched out every day and this is there way to cope with it.

Everybody keep writing there are people that enjoy your stories with out leaving a comment.

please i want to know whom she gets next night, maybe tom again, please wright more.

would like to see what happens next. Please keep writing, oldfart4fun. Oh, and keep her faithful. Those stories with slut wives are just a turn-off and they end the story there as well.

That's it Traci will become a slut and John will get cut off as she cuckolds him again and again either that or he will be raising other mens kids.

He needs to cut his losses and get a divorce

How nicely it hit every typical cuck button.

Same old, same old.

Very good story. 5 stars!! My wife lets men cum in her bareback. She says using condoms just doesn't feel the same and as a man I have to agree. But she is on birth control and the 2 guys she is doing are older married men that have never cheated on their wives before. So, we are not too worried about STD's.

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