by satyricon.21
One of the best series on lit, excelent work, i even got used to the spelling. i hope you continue to write
Different type of story, but I really enjoyed reading it. Hope you continue with more good work.
You've written another excellent series. You are a really great writer. Please keep the stories coming.
this story is great read all chapters and while not being your ordinary mind control story the twist and turns and changes made it in to an even better story. i'll be reading the rest of your work too. i like the way you write. thnx a mill for a nice read.
I flew through the entire story, attempting to understand Doug. In the end, I sort of pitied him. Its as if he's mission out on the richest part of life and can't even realize what he's missing.
Satyricon, I loved the humour of this story and the beautifully wrought character of Doug (and others). I do hope you are still writing somewhere.
Fantastic story. I spent about 10 years living like Doug. Should have stayed there I often think!