All Comments on 'Rose Owns Torrie's Ass Ch. 03'

The writing was good, but the content of a lying, cheating, slut, whore of a bitch was just too much. Rose not only betrayed her friend, but she will betray anyone and stick a knife in anyone to get her way. They say revenge is a two way street and I hope that the revenge she is seeking will put her behind bars for a long time where she will really become Big Bertha's little bitch.

i would'nt want to cross this bitch but fuck her yes good story enjoyed it lots keep up the good work

That was simply amazing. You truely are a twisted writer. I loved it! ^.^ Would not want to cross her.. Damn she was evil.

-Hopelesspoet@hotmail.com

I read the story, it was a very well written and detailed story, and prob

set you up to do a BUNCH more stuff, and by the way I had wondered if you

were o.k. ever since I mentioned to you the idea of fashioning the other

girls blond hair into a flogger and beating the snot outta her with it

(while tied spread eagled). It's been so long.

O.k. the story. Well of all the chapters, this one was the least up my

alley actually. In the other stories the attacks were personal..and more

so, public, in front of their friends. With this one Torrie going to a

complete stranger Landlord, well it wasn't a bad idea to me.. but I can

get the same thing out of any sex story, it was a bunch of sex acts I see

in every other story. Logical, well written, detailed.. but it didn't

really hold MY attention as much as Rose's personal revenge.

Rose with Torrie's dad, well that just didn't work for me, I thought yea

maybe when she fucked him... but 2 things stuck out to ME, #1 the idea that

rose would suck him off. I liked it MUCH better when I saw rose as above

that brining the OTHERS down to a whore level.. now she is just some skank

brining her friends down to her level and rally can't gloat. Second the

Husband has absolutely no grounds to throw his innocent wife out, He's now

guilty of the same thing, so yea he can be a Hippocrite but to me it's not

the same.

As for Torie's mom. The idea of prostituting her seemed good at first, I

like the idea of the Young Rose gloating that she even controls the mothers

as her personal toys, but if I may ask.. where did the condoms come from?

Again I don't mean this to not say you didn't write an EXELENT story but

Condoms for ME..just make me go immediately limp, they are disgusting to me

and leave the woman some dignity....I would have rather Rose had

confiscated the woman's Birth Control Pills and left the outcome a

question. Was it logical? Yes but not where *I* would have gone. I also

thought along with the lack of condoms, Rose would have also prostituted

the woman to Known people, People she worked for, School friends from

ROse's school, or best yet some boy friends or her husband's rivals that

have always wanted to put her in her place. Man she had turned down in the

past or refused to service. and would Pay ROse for the privdledge.

Give us another chapter

by far the best story I've ever read...

Never cross your friends, cuz paybacks a real BITCH!

I would love to read more including herb keeping the step daughter and his new wife forcing her into more things plus her little girl friends getting even with her more ways in one maybe help make her everyones pet and help keep mom in jail that way she meets her new mistress!

I do enjoy a story with a happy ending!

I would like to read more maybe step dad gets married to his new girlfriend and she keeps controlling her friend into more crazy things!

Damn, that was harsh but 5 fucking stars all the way through.

Can we get an encore, please? Wendy and Torrie hooking on, on the streets in the slums, while Herb and Rose enjoy living the freshly in love, maybe even newly wed, high life?