All Comments on 'Roses are Red, Spinach is Green'

Thanks for another good story, I was fooled all the way on who the Secret Vaentine was. Ya' got me on that one, ronde. Keep 'em coming...

Great story! Had me going until the very last! Keep them cumming!!!!

Definitely the best out of the submissions... I loved it :)

I loved the story and the mix of prose and poetry! Good job!!

I could feel his pain and her insecurities. Very nicely drawn. You need to follow up with Donna and how she finds her valentine.

Ronde - - -

I was betting on Donna. Although the "Office Rules" were established, there are exceptions to rules.

Once again you have managed to make my weekend with a superb story.

I also concur with BridgetKeeney in regards to Donna. She does indeed deserve a story of her own, perhaps something clever with Carl.

Thank you ever so much, and a Happy Valentine's Day to you.

Sincerely,

Boswell

Looking forward to the next one. A very neat plot.

Looking forward to the next one. A very neat plot.

Ronde,

I loved this story as I have loved all your stories in the past. You really do know how to write for a woman.

Hugs and Kisses

Dahna Jeanne

Please keep them coming, i will keep looking for new ones

Had my money on Donna, but then you can never can tell with the ladies can you ? Very touching ending . . .

as usual. Interesting characters and a fun twist at the end.

I just wanted to say I really liked your story - i'm a bit of a romantic guy at heart, not that lucky in love (am 30 this year and my last g/f was end of 2002 for 5 weeks)! I liked the twist at the end; was sitting here thinking "Oh, but it's gonna be Donna who wrote those obviously)" lol.

Was nice to be proven wrong :) I will be contributing my first story soon under Romance section, so stay tuned. It will most likely be semi-autobiographical - the main character will be a guy who has been single for most of his life until he meets the woman of his dreams...if life imitated art in this case, eh? :p

Keep up the good work!!

Steve 29 from UK

This story is both sweet and hot. I really wound up caring about the characters, and the suspense was tantalizing. I thought Donna was going to be the one, as apparently many other readers did. I'm glad it was Christa, though.

Although I suspected it was Donna I was definitely rooting for it to be Christa. It was such a realistic story with a real woman's real fears about marriage and commitment. And so romantic. NO COMPLAINTS!

I just love a good love story and this one was just that. Well told - just enough hot sex; a bit of a mystery; and a very happy ending.

I knew that Donna was involved with the delivery of valentines but I was pulling for Christa to be the source.

Keep up the good work.

Excellent story. As others have said, my money was on Donna, but your version was much better than mine could have been. One thing, though. Who honeymoons in Gatlinburg, TN?

Well you had me there, I thought it was Donna too. Great story and it well of all the heartache that the 'wondering' can give a man.

And ah.... to answer one of the posters about honeymooning in Gatlinburg, ....ah...I did... :)

a wonderfully sweet story.

And you did a good job of faking me out. Laughing now.

Well done

My only complaint with any of the stories of yours I've read comes in this one: Gatlinburg? Why not honeymoon in hell? :)

Thought it was Donna too. Great story, keep up the good work.

It's wonderful to find a story that is Romantic and Sweet and has unforgettable characters. This story was a joy throughout! Well Written! A pleasant read!

I needed a sweet, romantic story with a bit of hot sex in it! It made me smile to think of the capability of romance! And yes, I thought for sure it was Donna, too! I did not know if I was disappointed or happy it was Christa! Kudos and congrats!!

WONDERFUL story...and to the idiot who wonders who honeymoons in Gatlinburg, TN...it is an absolutely GORGEOUS place in the mountains. A HUGE honeymoon spot. Next time find out before you make a fucking ass of yourself.

loved the soppy poems - I was in suspense until the end when I thought it would be Donna walking in on him - but was pleasantly surprised to find it was the girl he loved - very touching.

The writer does really fine work, choosing his words with care, though I admit that the heroine's poetry was slightly off the mark!

Thank you ronde.

Damn, I was sure it was Donna.

If it were me on the receiving end, I would need medical care for my fingernails

Roses are red

And are flora, not fauna.

You sure had me going -

I was sure it was Donna!

I thought it was Donna. At least she was in on it. Nice story. Well played.

but was hoping it was Donna who had the hots for him....the poems were funny....

But I was sort of voting for Donna. Enjoyed the story. Thank you. Jim

for those who understand its meaning, TK U MLJ LV NV

Roses are red,

Gray can be slate,

I really must say,

this story was great!

very nicely written and a great way to convey your feelings.

Refreshing, and a pleasant change from most of the junk on lit.

good thru 2 pages

I was hoping it was Donna.

FUCKING STUPID!! THE TWO BITCHES DONNA AND CHRISTA WAS PLAYING WITH THE WIMP!! DONNA SHOULD BE REPRIMANDED FOR THE SECURITY BREACHES WITH THE VALENTINES MESSAGES AND THE WEAK WIMPY MAN SHOULD NOT HAVE SO EASILY FORGIVEN CHRISTA'S BEHAVIOUR!!

PUSSYWHIPPED MAN, NOT ROMANCE

This 34yr old man was desperate to keep calling the bitch after she said fuck all about his proposal.

His conversations with the HR bitch Donna was annoying and her advice pathetic!!

Your romance stories are always the best except for this one, totally disliked it

This just struck me wrong. Christa is a weak person and our hero isn't much better. Maybe they do deserve each other. I was hoping that Donna was doing this, but she was a more even person and wouldn't do something like that herself. All in all this wasn't worth the time. 2*

Having it be Donna

Would’ve made us quite numb,

But making it Chista

Was really quite dumb

Had me going for a bit thinking it was Donna! Not sure how I would feel with Krista's emotional gymnastics, but well written. 4.5*

All’s well that ends well.

T’was a surprise at the end.

Just checking out some older stories by that I haven't. Great story!

5

I must admit that I thought (hoped?) that it was Donna and I felt a bit let down when I found out that it wasn’t. Oh well, never mind.