All Comments on 'Rotten to the Core'

What the fuck.

Huh..... So he the devil's full body condom?

Very interesting story line. Good job of adding in the fantasy/sci-fi element slowly. There should be more to this story though.

What a different story! As with any story, I liked some parts better than others. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Started as a great story, then got weird.

I hope the flashbacks weren't confusing. This was an experiment. Thanks.

I'll be keeping a look out for further chapters. It's been so long since I've read such a unique and fucked up story. (fucked up in a good way mind you) I truly enjoyed this thumping good read

In the information before the story you should inform the reader of what is in the story. I lost interest in this story when you turned into 3 people during sex! Inform your readers or put it into a different category!

lost me some where in there

Fantastic, this absolutely has the potential for a long novel I would love to read.

Thank you, Lost Boy!

Another great story from a master story teller . Thank you for a wonderful read .

How many times can you re-skin the same story?

Some guy with unknown powers can do whatever the hell he wants, fucks everyone especially family, and everyone has unending loyalty to him.

Of course, can't forget that one special aspect where the protagonist just gets dragged along for the ride and everything is already prearranged for him.

You lost me when the mother referred to her own asshole as a chocolate starfish, but it got so much worse after that. Get off of Encycolpedia Dramatica and Urban Dictionary. Literally no one calls their own butthole that during actual sex.

The little things add up. The more unbelievable and weird little things like that you put into a story, the more unwilling to suspend disbelief your audience becomes. I’m not going to buy unbelievably corny, overdone slut-mother incest to chocolate starfishes to soul destroying demon sex all in the same story.

Although I enjoyed the story, the time shifts were very confusing to follow.

Hound, Kidd, Deer, is this a reference to the law firm, Wolf, Ram & Hart, from the tv show Angel? Awesome!

This is the first story of yours that I’ve read. A great story, if a little difficult to follow. I’m about to read it again to get my head around it.

Your reference to the Left hand path was more than enough to get me curious. I looked into it some, and things are mailing a little more sense, now. So, thank you for that.

Weird ending. I couldn't follow this story very wekk.