All Comments on 'Rumors Ch. 02'

Like reading a story with sex thrown in, hope you continue, lots of ways to take it. Good work.

A most enjoyable story and getting better.

felt a little formal. the discussions seem a little too ethics-professor and not enough day to day. while some people have the intelligence and vocabulary to converse like these people did, few would choose to speak so formally and fewer would have such elaborate thoughts so quickly into a new situation.

Again the plot is getting stale with the polyamory and convoluted interconnected familiar incestous which includes practically ever character you introduce. I think I'm done.

This is a six chapter story and you think you know the plot after the first two?

If you are done then please go. I am tired of reading comments that are snide and just taking pot shots from hiding. If you are so good, please write your own stories. Then others can take pot shots at your work from the safety of hiding.

he will do anything to make this situation right for everyone,,he got it all figured out and quickly! great story but the dialogue a bit formal, stilted maybe in this chapter..

including recently re-reading a lot of "First Year" and "Second year" etc. but i like the story a lot. 5 stars for both Chapter 1 & 2. you always seem to have a few twists and turns in your plot lines - keeps the reader - at least this one - guessing! I hope you keep on writing!