All Comments on 'Run of Luck'

I really enjoyed this one. It was different and fun. Thanks for a good write.

is that one has absolutely no idea how it will end! I figured something bad was going to happen to him, but the exact ending was a bit unexpected. What is the significance of the old man? As a reminder that we all pay the price for our misdeeds?

I read here all the time but very rarely comment. Your story was geat. Extremely well written and it kept me on my toes. Thanks for adding the touch of drama to my day

You didn't give the ending away and kept a good pace. This was a really nice, self-contained read. Thank you.

Tail End Pete

You must use spellcheck.

I also read some of the other stories from this writer, I can only say refreshing and different. This one catches the reader unprepared, good.

you took me on a nice journey, thanks for the ride!

a nice tale of greed but thenhis past life catches up with him and everything he had is gone and he is behind bars...poetic justice me thinks....