All Comments on 'Runner Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
wowee!

Totally awesome! I await the next chapter with bated breath.

PrincessErinPrincessErinalmost 16 years ago
Wow

Still a little creepy but still a great story.

Inky_DarknessInky_Darknessalmost 16 years ago
Oooo and the plot thickens

Trip having true dreams is a very nice touch, knew he couldn't be just a red hot hunk of masculinity. This story is definitely growing on me!

GlosUKGlosUKalmost 16 years ago
I'm won over...

Been away so logged on tonight. Read Ch1 and wasn't drawn in, then read Ch2 and it was pulling me in and now Ch3 has hooked me. Well Done DK. PJ xx

Alive_1Alive_1almost 16 years ago
might make one hell of a better movie

Than the ones that are promoting vampire love these days.

The characters are becoming rounded personalities.

You have a talent

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
finish this please

please d.k. r u going to finish this story.... cause i wld love to see its ending..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
More please!

Exciting, thrilling, keep up the good work!

PennLadyPennLadyover 14 years ago
Catching up

I saw Ch 4 and went back to read previous installments before moving on. I think this is really interesting, lots of hints of *something* being dropped and it'll be fun to watch them resolve. One reality intrusion: can Trip really adopt Wendy's kids when the father is still around, and apparently has partial custody/visitation rights (they went to him for the weekend)? I realize this may never come up again in the story, but it just stuck in my head.

a_fabulous_1mana_fabulous_1manover 14 years ago
I agree with Alive_1

I would LOVE to see this made into a movie. I can see each of the characters in my minds eye. I think the plot would translate well to the big screen. I would definitely pay good money to see it.

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Hey: I'm sorry about chapter two of Captive Angel being posted before chapter one. There was a paragraph or two that needed editing and I turned it back in to those who run this place. It should be out soon. Also. If there are any of my books you would like reported just tell...

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