All Comments on 'Running to Something Larger'

Larger is always better. Nyeet!

Boyd Percy

Heartwarming and sweet. The prodigal daughter returns. I can’t seem to stop from smiling. What a very clever piece of wordsmanship.*****

"yeet"? Is this the new thing that must be included in every other motherfucking story on this site now? What are you, a bunch of middle aged "out of it" people who heard that some snotty fucking kids say this word so you decide to force it into your stories now to try to seem hip and cool?

Laughed out loud a few times and chuckled through the rest. You are a terrific storyteller, and each new offering is a treat.

Thanks for bringing this clever little work to us. It's sad that Boston has to limit it's entrants -- many more runners would participate if they could.

Hilarious! Great little parody and the play on "race" was just delicious. The aggravation to Dominantyetservile was the icing on the cake. Yeet!

That was fun!

Confusing start, where was the parady, must have been asleep.

Did this have another Yeet? What did dancing and basketball have to do with boring running?

I don't get it. Was it a parody? If so, of what? I am glad this is not the first of your stories that I have read.

Fun story and nicely crafted.

Never let anyone say you don’t commit to a bit.

Vanilla

Very shallow Vanilla story, What was the point of it, did I miss the point.

Hilarious, and expertly done. And "interracial"? Genius!

"Yeet!"

LOL I wouldn't have taken her back