by BlueWolfDancer4454
Not sure were your taking this but can't wait to see were it's going. Hope you keep it up.
Please continue?
Great idea. Both the story and choosing to start off with a chapter 0. First pass when this one came up I held off, but your Chapter one hooked me enough to try it out and fortunately, there wasn't too much of a message break to understand what was going on if you started there. Hope this story keeps flowing through you and out to us xD
The story seems a little dark, but that is par for the course for this genre. Characters are well described with good voices. Plenty of the Author's personality is on display. I am very interested to see where this story goes.
Sincerely,
Payenbrant
wow what a fkd up start. (storywise)
I like it. looking forward to the Story